All Comments on 'Bad Teacher: Living Together Ch. 01'

you over use the words mature lover. reading the same phrase so many times can get annoying.

You should have never written this chapter. You are ruining a good thing. Ryan continues to lie to everyone. He has thoughts about cheating on Carmen with her own daughter though for the present he doesn't act on them. The ex is unfairly portrayed in a bad light for not accepting a child that we know is not his and is the result of an affair that put the horns on him.

Also you say how mature she looks while at the same time you talk about how she doesn't look her age. The repetition and conflicting interest hurts the story in my opinion. However I still love reading this series and am glad you continued it.

I read the first part because of the previous stories... I won't read further. Seems like you are trying to milk this along for no apparent reason. The whole notion that everyone suddenly realizes how in love they are because they hear them fucking like bunnies is more than a little silly. I liked the premise on the first part of the series, this one, not at all.... She's not a bad teacher now, she's just a slut. Yawn....

Another hot entry into an awesome series. Looking forward to the next chapter!

im sorry for saying milking the story. all i have done on here for the past week is ridicule everyone, when icant write mysaelf. i do this because i am starving for attention. dont pay any attention to me.

We did expect more stories from you.But dont ruin the existing by your imagination.Sorry for saying this it may lose its essence.We enjoyed your all bad teacher part except this last living together

This series has been my favorite on the site, and I come back to read it often. Can't wait to see what else you write, whether it's a continuation of Bad Teacher, or a new series.

I've read your stories several times. I hope you continue to write and don't mind those negative comments.

I like the new story and suspect that this first chapter is only an opening to further adventures for Ryan

ryan kind of a asshole, one carman said only her daughter and ryan matter what about her first son, and second you do not grab her tit in front of her son, I would have beat the shit out of him.

Please right more stories my frnd. Iam Waitin..

Mother incest d best

Samo samo....I give up.

Don

I've enjoyed your writing but this has been one of the worst I've seen from you.

Lack of proofreading.

The way he treats Carmen in front of both families

The lack of respect Ryan shows towards anyone in this chapter.

Really was disappointed at the direction you've taken with this chapter and I don't believe I'll read any more of this series.

She takes on a lover half her age and then shows the world what an incredible slut she is by making their living together an open book. The humiliating of taking the certainty of ostracism and ridicule from her friends and possible rejection by her family at her young lover's insistence is too hot for words. Bravo ! for taking the steamy relationship to the next level where most authors wimp out.

Good.i am fan of you getup.

Write new stories or series.

So erotic is your stories.

Get a proof reader

Michelle deserves a series

Ryan really gets a kick out of what he does. Showing off his dominance and arrogance although he does it in a more passive way than you might expect, almost like a reserved asshole. Like kissing Carmen in front of her son but not actually rubbing it in with words, that sort of thing. He just can't live and let live; he's gotta rub it in, in some way, just for kicks.