All Comments on 'Bahama Mama'

I thought that was pretty good, I really liked it. The one thing I would've liked is if there'd been slightly more build up, like if Wendy had know that Sara and Jason were watching and had started something with them without their dad knowing, then the dad had got involved later. Something like that to stretch the story out a little more and add a little tension or something.

tell us more about these four...and for women/moms like myself..would like to see jason/dad also into some hot bi action especially dad eating jason's cremepie and vice versa..and wendy/sara insisting on other bi action betwen dad/jason..with both women as part of it..nothing hotter than that scenerio for sex charged women and bi couples like us..

This was a good one, I'd love to read more of it (as long as things don't get to gay for my taste)

Please continue!

I agree with Balke about build-up however I don't agree with the other comment of putting father and son together . Remember that Wendy is not their mother . It would be nice to read more with Dad fucking daughter and Jason scewing Wendy .

This was great; please write more! (Not necessarily with this story-line.)

loved it would like to hear about the rest of the vaca

this is tooooooooooooooooooooooo goooooooooooooooooooooood stories its my dream i wish it cme true

this is best stories i every come across

That was so sexy and over TOO soon! Please write more!!!

that was too sexy.....nice.....;-).....

Had me wet and asking my cyber boyfriend to take me as we read. Well written and with wonderful gift for description. I only hope my stories do as well as yous do. Keep writing, I hope to read more of you.

One of my new favorites on Literotica! I do wish there had been more of the final scene on the beach with the foursome. There needs to be a chapter 2!

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getting parents and children together for sex ALWAYS kills a story. keep the parents out of the sex, they can know about the kids BUT NOT JOIN IN.