by Dark_Brother
this is one of the best stories ever well balanced between sex and the main plot. but please dont make the mistake most writers in mindcontrol do and add too many characters, only if the hero has completely conquered all current asses & every hole possible and completing his current quest only then would he be able explore new doors ; no pressure i know youve got exellent taste but they all almost screwup in the end so im just looking out for you or in this case my self the reader. plus can you like make nick take his sisters ass cherry and making it into a slightly forcefull element nothing rape like just you know her embaressment and reluctance & some mild horror/prank/revenge being publicly fucked up the ass by her kid brother in-front of her brother's harem & not a big crowd to just 3-5 is enough, & some alien human lesbian threesome would be awesome.
I just can't wait for each chapter, you really should try and write a book, you sure have the brains and skill for it.
Unless it is several I think it will be Lela. Maybe all, maybe the twins and Gina with sis, mom and Nancy on the side and Lela out in space. Who knows? But it will be interesting, I'm sure.
It's quite frustrating. Still great story!
I’m trying to read slowly as I don’t want this to end. Can’t control myself though 😄