All Comments on 'Bank Hold Up'

Loved your story .Please continue with it.Thanks

Good proofreading, no quibbles except the possibility that sticking a gun up someone's ass and pulling the trigger might cause the blowback to blow up the gun and the shooter's hand, as well as blow up the person whose ass is involved. Don't try this at home. But a good stroker nevertheless.

I gave you a 4 for this one but another would bring it up to a 5. There is room for at least one more segment, please continue.

But you did. This gets a 5 and I hope that you continue. You've mannaged to mix HOT sex and love, real true make the reader feel it love, in with a great story line.For that you deserve a Wow! Thank you.

Please continue to write awesome stories like this.

(^_^)

Blessed Be

I haven't seen any other story with this kind of angle, very interesting thru-out

Kind of wish that I were in Dougs' shoes!!

DKP

Well done, really enjoyed the story

Great story, loved the way it played out would like to see it continue. Will he marry one or both. Will one or both have children?

It is so nice to find stories that have such cock hardening sex tied with equally heart tugging loving emotion. Will

I love a good problem solver. Save both women and then brilliantly accept his fate and say we gotta get a bigger house. Poor guy.

I liked the hair on Doug's manly chest!