All Comments on 'Bar Slut'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
Sorry about the middling vote

You had a hot 5 coming until the husband shows up liking the show. Admittedly there's not much a husband could do in a situation like this besides getting beaten up trying to get his wife through the door. Still he could have gotten a camera and taken some pics for the eventual divorce suit..he could even give a set of copies to his wife, something to remember him by.

The more honest response to a loveless marriage is a (hopefully)friendly no fault divorce and getting on with their lives.

gtboomergtboomerover 18 years ago
Nasty

Great story, I really enjoyed it.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
Well done!

Very nicely written.

Oralfixation827Oralfixation827almost 5 years ago
My kinda woman

Very hot and nasty I really hope to hear more of her slutty adventures

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AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
great writing

This is a superb love story, although there was no reason to make the heroine an adulteress.

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