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by Ed0613

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AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
Great.

I really enjoyed this story, it was well told. I especially liked your choice of endings.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago

This is not a bad story (despite the spelling errors) but there is very little actual sex in it, and why would she keep the baby of a man who raped her??

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Like to talk to both men and women about erotic writing. I am always looking for people to help me edit my work and welcome input about spelling, punctuation, syntax and the general readability of my stories. Right now, (June 2013) I am doing research for the stories I write ...