All Comments on 'Bare Beach Girl's Secret'

by aichiyu

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JamesSDJamesSDabout 18 years ago
Nice

I really enjoyed this story. Simple and to the point, but such a great visual. Well done.

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago

This story's not realistic at all..

sunsoakersunsoakerover 10 years ago
A fantasy come true

I've had the same fantasy, but never a reality, which makes this story so exciting and you tll it well. I just wish there was some future encounter. Maybe another story is in order :-)

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