All Comments on 'Barn Dance'

intense and hot and bluntly honest; great pace, love the internal dialogue. 5 stars from me.

5 stars from me as well,

I enjoyed the pace and honesty of the story and await the next installment eagerly..

Your writing is beautiful. This was just perfect, every little bit of it. Thank you!

This story just blew me away. It was wicked, raw, graphic, and deliciously detailed. Loved it!

Wow! You sure can write. This was so vivid and enticing.

After having peeked trough the door of your barn, chocolate won't ever taste the same again for me.

Hot or what ?

That visioneer was EROTIC with a capital H

Beautifully written

hello, i'm rimi and i am a long time lurker on literotica. humil stories on literotica is a guilty pleasure for me and for whatever reason i have never left a comment on a story here before. but your writing really moved me, your tessa is beautiful in her debauchery and byron could be a star in my most secret fantasies. thank you for writing this almost poetic story.

loved the story. i would love for you to develop the characters more. very very well written.

I'm personally not into sadism, but you explored the theme in a naughty way. The game with chocolate and clothespins was awesome, I'll keep that in mind when writing my next stories. Keep writing, visioneer!

I feel your pain, your guilt, and your pleasure.

Set aside the scenes, that were mouthwatering, the brain game in your chosen words hit hard!

Omg such a sexy story !! Thanks alot

I'm very happy you stopped by, as it led me to this story. Love the real emotion that makes the sex even hotter. True erotica, at its finest.

I hate when I don't check tags. That is when I get tripped up.

I hate cheaters. Full stop . Otherwise, this is hot enough to feel their sweat.

This one has been publish for a while...

I'm not sure what to say. I felt like I was there. I could see myself and my feistynous in Tessa. This was truely a wonderful read. I enjoyed every word..all of it. Feeding into my submissive fantasies and deepess desires.

Please write more. I'll be one of your readers and can only hope in achiving to write a story like this one.

Josie

Delightful writing. The characterization is excellent, just enough to be real, lean enough to not clutter our minds. thank you.

Great story, only ending up on the ground was as disorienting for me, as it was for her. I jest. I'm reading and rereading the comment above, "lean enough to not clutter our minds. Thank you." I think you left plenty to clutter my mind, and I thank you for that. It's left me a bit to chew on, and while I love the works when I'm thru reading, I rarely comment bc I don't know when to stop, I'm a chatterbox. But I'll end here before I use anymore of my abbreviations! 🙋🏻‍♀️

pobrat

Perfectly rendered!

Here's a sentence worth noting: "in sex Byron is the verb, and I am his object."