All Comments on 'Based on a True Fantasy'

Damn that was sexy as hell! I've read the work of both authors and loved all I have read. I think it is great that you both have taken the time to combine your talents. This story was sexy and hot and I hope there will be more. I can not WAIT to read more.

Awesome story

Ha Ha Ha, that's a good one. What's next? Actual fiction?

I'm breathless

Your collaboration with Youbadboy means that two of my favorite authors on this entire site teamed up to create magick.

So good.

There are maybe a handful of authors here that I'm in awe of, (Youbadboy, Bob Clarke Jr, Xyster, I_love_you_in_me...) and you've managed to tease a cajole your way into this group for me.

Sensational.

I SO look forward to reading the rest of this series now.

When I read what it said at the top, I actually said out loud that I was in heaven. That's the only possible way I could have found a story co-written by my two favorite writers on the site. I was not let down at all. Both of your writing skills are magnificent, unique and work perfectly with the other's. Great story.

The whole Daddy/Daughter email scenario was incredibly hot. The slow build up was exquisitely erotic. Keep up the good work.

Can't wait for more of this story.

Please write more! more like his...

Love it! I thought the letter writing to connunicate feelings back and forth was awesome! :). I'll have to reread it again later, I was so tired and kept falling asleep and waking up while reading it, so kind of in that inbetween state mentally, heh. Prolly missed some bits!

I'm never pleased with the conflicted daddy syndrome that stories always seem to have, it just grinds on me, heh. ...but he isn't tooooo bad. Love how she's working him though! How could he answer the damned phone?! Who does that??. Rofl. I'm about to slide up inside a girl, daughter or not, *I'm* not answering the damned phone! Hehehe. ....and then ditches! That annoying conflict swimming to the surface. Drown it man, drown it!! ;). Yes, the conpany will die if you're gon an extra hour, lol.