All Comments on 'Basketball Diaries Ch. 02'

The day before she's worried about pregnancy from someone she's had a crush on; and now she wants it from the coach that she just met?

I think that if you make your characters go overboard in their behaviour it's going to love the charm of the first chapter.

that was the hottest story i have read in a long time. i hope there is a third chapter maybe with a threesome. great job

But it would have been better if after they had fucked she realized that they did so in her fertile period.

Umm read the story again, she just said in order to manipulate him, she doesn't let him cum in her though

""Coach was ready to cum too. Joey felt his cock twitch and grow even harder than it was before. "No, wait!" she cried out, "Wait!" She moved forward, reluctantly unsheathing his cock from her cunt, since she had still not finished her own orgasm. "Don't come inside me, I want to swallow us together!" she urged.

Coach had no complaints. Just as Joey slipped his hard cock down her throat, he came hard, unleashing a full load of warm fluid down her gullet. To his amazement, Joey didn't choke. Instead, she took his momentous load like a pro. She swallowed as spurt after spurt of his cum kept filling her mouth. """

She probably agreed with him at first in order to entice him, read the story guys

it was ok,it just needed more sex

It was awesome.. Need another chapter.. Possibly if incest can come in (Kevin with his sister)..