All Comments on 'Bath Night Revisited'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Brilliant

So very hot. The loving tenderness mixed with the soft kinky spanking and bondage bits. Brooke is the perfect submissive and Donna the perfect dominant. With these two Friday nights are made for bathing and bondage and spankings. More please!

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
More please :)

This story was great nice mix of playfulness and dominance the best story story I've read here recently. Please write another chapter if you can.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
The best Girl on Girl story of 2014

The dynamic between Donna and Brooke is perfect, and you should expand on their relationship in the next chapter. This story is the equivalent of that scene titled the Lesbo Show (Google It) Sinn Sage and Dani Daniels it was that hot.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
3/10

This story is bad. Great idea, total fail on the writing part. The dialogue is awkward and clunky and why the heck are the characters shouting at each other every time they talk, even when they're thinking? This was obnoxious to read. Won't be reading the rest of the series that's for sure.

ArrowQuiverArrowQuiverabout 1 year ago

Thoroughly loved the whole story. Brooke will have a good story to tell when she gets back to her sorority,,,

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