by caterwauller
As I have come to expect from this writer, it is full of warm sensuality and she appreciates that sometimes sensual is more erotic than sexual.
Cat,
I was transported to that outcropping, feeling every nuance of pleasure with you. This is spectacular writing! When I had finished reading this story, I sat dumfounded feeling as if I had witnessed a rare and beautifully sublime moment. Tears of happiness were somehow pushing at the back of my eyes, but I restrained them. Men, of course, need to maintain our composure. You have captured the sensuous joys of youth, the private pleasures that I have also indulged in, and hey, still do! (just don't tell my friends ;)
Well composed, Cat. A beautiful story. You have a command of the language that is unsurpassed on this site. A work of dreamlike erotic wonder... While it shows your typical use of description and your gentle, slow pace, full of detail, it surpasses your previous stories. Your best yet.