All Comments on 'Bathtime'

please write more ;)

That was a decent story-it went kinda quickly, but sometimes, that's all you need for a decent toss-off.

Well played, fairly realistic, all that.

Great story. Very sexy. Makes me wish I had a twin..

Good story.

I have to admit that their having anal,especially the way it was described, was hot. Kind of wished I was there.

"The question hung in the air...what IF"? As I'm sure all the reader's of of this story have questioned, "What if"? That they did fuck is unusual. That was was no foreplay! Again, unusual And again...what if??/.

I have read this story a few times and enjoy it each time. It is obviously not one for reality, but for suspended belief and pure erotica it is pretty hot!

would love to read what happens next

Hmmm.reminds me of the fun times

my twin sister and I used to have together. .She passed away a few years ago

But I sure miss her.

Sat naked on the bed reading this, slowly stroking my erection. lubricating my fingers to aid the pleasure, finally reaching the point where I could hold back no further, and laying back enjoying a fantastic ejaculation covering my stomach and chest in sperm. Thank you for allowing me the pleasure

You did it in the past, you can do much better than this

I thought it was pretty good. A nice short story that kept you on edge :). Realistic? Of course not, but still awfully fun! The last poster sounds like the authors fucking mother, rofl.

That was a great story would love a follow up on them now

As someone who is obsessed with butt stuff, this was a dream. More please :P

Great one pager but it could benefit from some more character development. This is one for a quick wank but with invested in the characters, more separate interactions, I would be returning to this again and again.

This was soo hot I have had dreams about fucking my hot little sister for years now and I might have to after reading this and she had told me she loves my cock when she accidentally walked in on me masturbating :) I hope you write more stories like these!

They need to have babies 2 of each 2 boys and 2 girls, so daddy and mommy can teach them to fuc and breed

Needs a sequel.

yes I have 7 sisters and 6 brothers, I had sex with 4 younger sisters over a period of about 5 years, last one was about 12, I was around 15, I saw some of my other brothers also having sex with the girls, I don't think it has done any of us any harm, we are all the best of friends.

21C5

Yeah I so love brother sister incest stories , needs a sequal

They need to fuck again and cum inside her again to get her pregnant!

I dream of fucking my big titted big sister too, incest stories are the best.

I enjoyed this greatly, almost got me off instantly, would love to have this happen to me.

I really liked the ending with a question bit.

In your first few paragraphs you made me quite aroused.

Loved the read, nice story. Got me hard and horny.

Still an AWESOME episode of sibling love and lust.

So many wish we were frat twins.

Love twin stories.

A little doubt that she would his cock in her ass first and that she was a virgin.

Still enjoyed the sex

Great story of incest and sexual attraction.

Really enjoyed the historical interaction as well as the love making. You captured the lust that's felt at that age perfectly.

One of my favourites :)

Ok by the comments it's clear some people are easy to please and have no clue what a good story is this was not a good story also very clear that you are a Virgen cause anyone who has any common sense or experience in sex would know your not just going shove your dick into a Virgen and her not feel any kind of pain it doesn't work that way and only a Virgen or a dumb ass would think it does and would write about it like it does and the ones commenting saying this is fantastic story and so on are dumb asses and wouldn't surprise me Virgens themselves

Nice little notion of a story, with a brother fucking his twin sister in the ass for their first intimat experience before eating her out and finally de-virgining her on their parentt' bed. Interesting.

Why do you stop before the end of the story? You seem to only tell the beginning and not the middle and the end. You need to develope your stories if you really want to be a real auther not just a mediocre story teller.

I did like the short story.

I think that by the time this was written ‘morning after’ pills were available. 4

Bill S.

Made me cum 3x, had similar actual situation when i was 9 and my 11 year old cousin my 10 year old stepsister decided to teach me to fuck

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hawt, haWT, HAWT!

11/10!!!!!

The Anal brought down the stars from 5 to 1. I would have given 0, but that's not possible.

Too short not enough development.

Wonderful but rather short. Needs a sequel., thank YOU