All Comments on 'Bathtime'

Wonderful but rather short. Needs a sequel., thank YOU

Too short not enough development.

The Anal brought down the stars from 5 to 1. I would have given 0, but that's not possible.

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hawt, haWT, HAWT!

11/10!!!!!

Made me cum 3x, had similar actual situation when i was 9 and my 11 year old cousin my 10 year old stepsister decided to teach me to fuck

I think that by the time this was written ‘morning after’ pills were available. 4

Bill S.

Why do you stop before the end of the story? You seem to only tell the beginning and not the middle and the end. You need to develope your stories if you really want to be a real auther not just a mediocre story teller.

I did like the short story.

Nice little notion of a story, with a brother fucking his twin sister in the ass for their first intimat experience before eating her out and finally de-virgining her on their parentt' bed. Interesting.

Ok by the comments it's clear some people are easy to please and have no clue what a good story is this was not a good story also very clear that you are a Virgen cause anyone who has any common sense or experience in sex would know your not just going shove your dick into a Virgen and her not feel any kind of pain it doesn't work that way and only a Virgen or a dumb ass would think it does and would write about it like it does and the ones commenting saying this is fantastic story and so on are dumb asses and wouldn't surprise me Virgens themselves

Great story of incest and sexual attraction.

Really enjoyed the historical interaction as well as the love making. You captured the lust that's felt at that age perfectly.

One of my favourites :)

Love twin stories.

A little doubt that she would his cock in her ass first and that she was a virgin.

Still enjoyed the sex

Still an AWESOME episode of sibling love and lust.

So many wish we were frat twins.

Loved the read, nice story. Got me hard and horny.

In your first few paragraphs you made me quite aroused.

I really liked the ending with a question bit.

I enjoyed this greatly, almost got me off instantly, would love to have this happen to me.

They need to fuck again and cum inside her again to get her pregnant!

I dream of fucking my big titted big sister too, incest stories are the best.

Yeah I so love brother sister incest stories , needs a sequal

yes I have 7 sisters and 6 brothers, I had sex with 4 younger sisters over a period of about 5 years, last one was about 12, I was around 15, I saw some of my other brothers also having sex with the girls, I don't think it has done any of us any harm, we are all the best of friends.

21C5

Needs a sequel.

They need to have babies 2 of each 2 boys and 2 girls, so daddy and mommy can teach them to fuc and breed

This was soo hot I have had dreams about fucking my hot little sister for years now and I might have to after reading this and she had told me she loves my cock when she accidentally walked in on me masturbating :) I hope you write more stories like these!

Great one pager but it could benefit from some more character development. This is one for a quick wank but with invested in the characters, more separate interactions, I would be returning to this again and again.

As someone who is obsessed with butt stuff, this was a dream. More please :P

That was a great story would love a follow up on them now

I thought it was pretty good. A nice short story that kept you on edge :). Realistic? Of course not, but still awfully fun! The last poster sounds like the authors fucking mother, rofl.

You did it in the past, you can do much better than this

Sat naked on the bed reading this, slowly stroking my erection. lubricating my fingers to aid the pleasure, finally reaching the point where I could hold back no further, and laying back enjoying a fantastic ejaculation covering my stomach and chest in sperm. Thank you for allowing me the pleasure

Hmmm.reminds me of the fun times

my twin sister and I used to have together. .She passed away a few years ago

But I sure miss her.

would love to read what happens next

I have read this story a few times and enjoy it each time. It is obviously not one for reality, but for suspended belief and pure erotica it is pretty hot!

"The question hung in the air...what IF"? As I'm sure all the reader's of of this story have questioned, "What if"? That they did fuck is unusual. That was was no foreplay! Again, unusual And again...what if??/.

I have to admit that their having anal,especially the way it was described, was hot. Kind of wished I was there.

Good story.

Great story. Very sexy. Makes me wish I had a twin..

That was a decent story-it went kinda quickly, but sometimes, that's all you need for a decent toss-off.

Well played, fairly realistic, all that.

please write more ;)

I love anal sex stories and combined with the incestual nature this was fucking incredible. Well done

great story!

CONTINUE THE STORY

Good grammar, spelling, pacing, "realness".

i came 5 times raing your stories more plez

and this is one of them!! only complaint is wwwwaaayyyyyyy too short! i love the anticipation! thanks, hope there is more!

half a story at best no begining rushed sex and no end so basicly half a story

DBRS

My girlfriend and I find your stories a great way to start off our evening of fun. Please keep the stories coming.

I used to leave incest magazines in my room and I knew my sister had read them so I knew she wanted to fuck as badly as I did and when we started it was as good as we both had dreamed it'd be.

Her pussy tastes so sweet

Great story!

I never fucked her in the ass but after we lost our virginity to each other we must have screwed a couple of hundred times. We couldn't get enough of each other at first and since our Mom worked late we had plenty of opportunities. I remember distinctly the first time we did it. I was sitting between her legs while we masturbated each other and as I leaned forward to suck on her petite breasts my hard dick got pressed up against her hot and very wet pussy so I started humping up and down while sucking each nipple. This was the furthest we had gone so far and it felt incredible. Well one time when I pulled back the head slipped down and when I pushed forward I was half inside. Both of our eyes bugged out and I just stopped moving.

We had crossed the final barrier, one we both agreed not to do. So I said I'll just go this far not all the way. Yeah right! After about 10 strokes I was buried up to my balls and her legs were around my back.

I should probably right a series of stories since I think people would like to read about us. How we started, how it progressed and how it continues pretty much to this day now thirty years later.

We're both married with 2 children each but we both agree the sex we have with each other is the best. It's just incredible. If you have a brother or sister and you're both willing what are you waiting for?

Get in there and start fucking!!

You said to not be embarrassed, so here goes my attempt: -blushes- I definitely was aroused by this and I admit I wish I had a super hot twin at the moment (I'm an only child). This story is so amazing and wonderfully written. The detail was fantastic and realistic. The fact that they made love on their parents' bed made it even hotter. I guess I love the whole incest/taboo thing. I think because I was so sheltered growing up that I still feel uneasy at times, but I have so much running around in my imagination and I love reading fiction on it. To me, it's amazing that other people have the same thoughts or ideas that I do. I am not alone in thinking it is incredibly sexy. :) Being a bit naughty definitely gets me excited. You are amazing and I am adding you to be my faves. ^_^

This issssssssssss soooooooooooo coooooooooooool! I love it. Just one thing is there a part2?

Gosh! That is so hot! I am so wet right now. I am going to wake my husband for a real good time! Thanks for the great read!

i love all of your stories...that i want everything you wrote done to me so badly...

I'm going to summerize all my feelings into two wards. I CAME

As per usual I have stumbled across a gold mine on this site. Thansk for the great cum.

It's been a long time since I've read Literotica frequently, but I still occasionally come back to reread this story. That's what happened tonight. I've never commented or given feedback before, despite your request, so I figured I would. Here's your feedback!

wow five stars best cum ive ever had - william

Are pretty hot! I'm just gonna keep going down the list of stories you've written. I'm hot and bothered and I plan on thinking of them when I masturbate later. Thanks!

that was a great story. it was really well written and was great on details. i am so wet right now! good job.

----jessica <3

I just came

Great story keep making ones like this

This is a really awesome story. Well written, with great description. Thanks for uploading it.

grate story

You know what I recently found out was you can take this pill or medicine crap and it kills off the sperm inside the girls body :) just saying

Oh nd amazing story I loved it

Great story, seemed very realistic

Like your writing style.

Lots get overanxious and don't describe enough. Many who describe enough just aren't kinky enough. You seem to have found a happy medium.

That last question hanging in the air in the piece? THAT there is a major, major kink to a lot of us perverted, sick fucks out here. > )

More pls

This could do with some work I did still blow my load if you want help hit me up on gingerboii01302@hotmail.com this could be my fav if it was improved

this was so great you should really keep this story going please

i couldnt stop reading, i read this twice and when i came it was GREAT

i mean im a female and i really enjoyed this very much! thanks for

such a great story.

This made me blow my load feet through the air! thank you

I got so horny reading this, as soon as I touched my cock I blew my load! U gotta continue this story!! PLEASE!!!!!!

You have got to continue this story its incredable! More please.

I almost blew my load just reading this thing; please, more to this story!!!!

This story made me CUM everywhere!!!!!

I'm all wet now.

Loved it ;P I've wanted to fuck my 18y.o cousin for years (I'm 15)... she's so hot and always walks around in pajamas (literally anywhere)... I swear she's teasing me....

I was jerking off to this as I thought of my sister, then she ran right past my room as I came, holySHIT! that was a thrill!

Oh god i've wanted to fuck my brother for sooo long. makes me horny everytime just reading this wishing i was doing him!

this was a good story. I actually fucked my cousin before. she has a 34 C-cup she was all screaming and moaning but in the end it was the same as your story.

i have wanted to participate in incest with my cousin since i read my first incest story. but the way you told your story... wow!

Im a big fan of incest erotica and desperately want to fuck my sister. I am 15 and fantasise about my 16 year old sister all the time. This story gave me a massive erection and i was tempted to cum whilst reading it, however, i felt it lacked in detail. I much prefer teasing each other and wondering what might happen before the action begins. It leads to a better climax when you get to the end of the story. Maybe his sister walking in on him wanking in the bath and getting horny would be better. Good story

Aside from the basic "good work", I do have this to say... This story could have the possibility to develop into something more than a one to two page article on the lusts of incest... A little bit more description would go a long way to feed the story and keep the reader engaged... Obviously, you would,t want to go into such detail as the spackle on the walls and the clever color motif picked out by the characters' parents on a run-through at the local home-depot, but a good charge of description will keep things in more perspective. Liked the story, it has potential.

This is my biggest fantasy, and your story started out well. I had worked myself up to a good hard-on when the story stopped. I'd love to see more.

Very good story other than it moved too fast and loses potential for a strong erotic response by reader.

Be more descriptive. Otherwise not bad.

oh my god very hot

I was masturbating the whole time. Wonderful story.

This is one of the best incest stories I have ever read! Keep up the good work!

great work keep it up

keep up the good work...

i loved it write other chapter

Please write a second story to this! I LOVE IT

This would have been much more pleasureable if we knew more about brother and sister. You start out building character and then quickly descend into dick/pussy/ass/cum/fuck world. A litte more depth would make the story really worthwhile. You know you can do better

I loved this story. I reminds me a time when i was teen and shared similar times with my step sister. I was 16 and she was 19. Nobody knew about our "relationship". Our parents (just recently married) had a small house with only one bathroom. Here was our little "game": Often, when she was in the bathtub, i would fake like i had to pee and could not hold it another second. Once i got into the bathroom and locked the door, she would aready have her ass wet and soaped up. She would turn around, bend over and i would fuck her ass till i shot a wad up her asshole. Then i'd piss, rinse off and leave. Whole thing took just a few minutes. Very hot time.!

Wow very nice. I liked your story a lot.

for example, the person two below me who insists on making an anti-incest remark on a story that's IN the INCEST/TABOO category. speaking of things "sucking" and not in the good way... yeah.<BR>

plus, i actually enjoy your writing and read your stories a lot, so i don't know wtf that part was about.<BR><BR>

for my two cents... excellent story, keep up the good work, i daresay you're among the best on here.<BR>

5/5, 100/100 :)

i like most of your stories, this is a really good one !!

not to be harsh but this story didnt excite me in the least and im a big incest fan. next time u write do a better fucking story than this jesus.

i was rubbing my clit the whole time, and its still throbbing.

i came three times reading this

My twin sister and I enjoyed such experiences from 14 thru college, even today once and a while, were 54.

dat was awsome,first time reader n I gotta admitt it made me cum pretty good