All Comments on 'Bathtime'

Mmm, stories like these always get me so horny. If I had a brother I'd want to do this all the time.

definatly a good read, i came so hard whilst reading this

Loved your story and I enjoyed every little bit of it. I must say that you painted some awesome images with your story. Well done and thanks.

It was very hot, If i was at home and not somewhere more public when reading it I would have jacked off.

got me off...a little short....read your other stories, keep writing

It was awesome. I masturbated b/c of this, and not to mention I actually fucked my sister. It was great.

Very well written and sexy story. I loved it.

I haven't gotten through all your stories yet, but all the ones I have read, this one included, are absolutely perfect. Just the right amount of tension, build-up, and anticipation; just the right balance of being so right, and so wonderfully wrong.

I really enjoyed the story. It would be so fun to do something like that with my sis, although we are both too old for that.

I think most of your stories are just about Perfect. ignore the fools who want more buildup.I think your imaginary family is more real thanthe one I married into. My wife and her brother are both past 50 and have never seen each other naked. How anal can you get?

i also humped my elder sister when she was taking a shower and i accidently went it.

I liked the story, and was hoping for more of a beginning and maybe some after story, does she get pregnant? Many of your stories begin and end too quickly, keep trying.

100 is too little of a rate. I tried to pleasure myself, but it was too short. Please continue this. I see you haven't writen anything for a while. Please write more.

A twin sister who becomes your fuck toy!

Does it get any better than that?

Oh, and fucking on Mom and dad's bed!

I AM SO HORNY RIGHT NOW!

Damn that was hot just the tought of them in the bathtub dets me off

Left me wanting more. Very well written and easy reading.

I need a cock so bad right now I can't stand it. VERY hot story. THANKS!

been reading alot of your stories and i enjoy THEM VERY MUCH sorry i didn't leave a comment on the others *blows you kiss* you are a hell of a writer........

much luv

yourfuturebabymomma jk lol

Had to read it twice!! This one got me so hard I thought my dick would explode!

That story was awsome. I love you work I have read others, but this was the best so far. My girlfriend and I had the best sex ever after reading this story. PLEASE keep up the great work. Can't wait for the next chapter. Thank You

That was the fastest I've ever gotten off reading a story. The strongest I've ever gotten reading a story too, come to think of it. Thanks to you, I had to clean off the computer screen. Anyway, awesome story. Keep up the excellent work.

Still Rock hard, Glad the girls enjoyed it too, That gives me something else to ponder.

Look forward to more.

rocco

Short and to the point--and hot as hell. Great stroke story, and I'm still hard after cumming!

u have a gift for writing stories this one made me really horny i cant wait for my bf to come home

very nicely done! i have read some of you other works, They are really good. Keep it up :)

that was absolutely amazing....incredibly hot and erotic, that should be on hbo or something omg i loved it!!!!!!!

Dude, you've got the nack for writing erotic stories. SOOOOO hot and horny, I came twice! Keep up the good work and I'll be looking for more of your stories! -SpazticStud

Your stories are so engrossing that I keep feeling let down when I go to read the next chapter. Whatever you do to make the stories so great and so hot, keep it up!

After reading this I went over to my girls house....she never knew what hit her.

-jim

that was one hot fucking story, write more, and give that hot fucking slut some more cock! I know brother will love it.

This story got me hot and got me off. Awesome job!

-Nikki

Thanks for this story..I had to play with myself as I was reading it...and imagined your cock hard as you wrote it..it got me so hot that I couldn't stop cummming..

Thanks for the story. Made my girlfriend and I play with ourselves until we both shot our loads. Then we fucked and had 2 more orgasms.

Thanks. Keep on writing.

Julie and Mike

i fingered my clit all through it, thanx for getting me sooo damn wet and my clits still hard!

I liked your story very much. It was well thought out and I do hope that you will take the time to write some other stories.

very sexy

I loved your story, it was realistic. I enjoyed every bit of it, i hope you write more.