All Comments on 'Battling Cuckold-Fantasy Addiction'

Gee wimpus - does your self analysis also excite your little weannie as much as your fantasy of self disrespect /male humiliation?<P>

Said fantasy because no person in their right mind seeks pain to excite either mental or physical freakiness.<P>

The concern for yourself should be both short and long term as once you are numbly jaded to the extreme what will you do next to get where you once were? <P>

Your progression to this worst fetish of self male humiliation leaves little else to excite unless personal disfigurement or child porn pushes you closer to your end and others take charge for the sake of those around you.<P>

It is probably too late to seek help but what else could you lose by trying without much to look forward to or live for. How sad.

fantastic work. the author has taken the time to start this out, building up beautifully to the inevitable. well thought out, well written, and well done all the way around.

Excellent story! Very erotic with a superb build up to what promises to be an exciting seduction. It's going to be interesting to see how Nikki responds.

You made a big issue of informing the reader that you used 30 pages of MS Word to write this story. You never mentioned the story was broken up into multiple chapters. Had I known that, I would have waited until the entire story was posted. I suspect other readers feel the same. Next time please title your story "Ch. 01," etc. so the reader has a choice. You are not "Mr. Steele," after all . . .

Sorry, you gotta make the guys more likeble - both appear to be self-centered long-winded jerks. Any woman who falls for either deserves what she gets - which I suspect is boredom.

Fuck you and your self righteous rant at the start. I was looking for something decent to read, but found this drivel instead. Poorly executed. Bitch.

more like closet gay. like cock? why not just come out.

Solid writing, but cut the snotty-superior Author's Note at the start. It was the only real turn off of the story.

Author is gay and should put the story in the correct category. Who dose he think he is fooling?

I had to lower the rating because I feel that any story that does not, in the title or at the beginning of the submission, indicate that it is part of a series deserves a reduced score. (If you feel this is harsh, my policy for nonconsent stories in other categories is automatic zero regardless of quality.)

And to the people who read and bashed this story despite the warnings, you are idiots and myker may have a point. By the way, have you ever heard of "safe, sane, and consensual"? As long as some sense is used masochists CAN get their jollies from abusive treatment with minimal long-term risks. And submissive =/= gay. Seriously, I can't understand what place knee-jerk reactions have in reading fictional stories. Or anywhere outside a doctor's office for that matter!

Sorry for the rant, myker, but I've seen so many quality femdom stories (even ones like this that only hint at it) get bashed that I have trouble holding my tongue, as it were. (And I wonder if most of these femdom-haters would act any different than the characters they brand "wimps" under the same circumstances. My guess is that they would break down even faster! Walk a mile in such a man's shoes, and you may form a completely new opinion of him.)

Looking forward to the next part, please hurry

A great start to a promising cuckold story with good build up and a tease of things to come. Already looking forward to Chapter 2.

Great dialog, believable plots and settings, and an uncommon ability to convey the inner life of a male submissive make myker one of the best.

Hey myker, we all know that your bashers here jerked off to your story, then reacted to "masturbater's remorse" by attacking you. They are the biggest losers imaginable. Don't let them get you down!

For analysis,a coplex confused submission,not in the least erotic but interesting as a case study.

Can't wait for chapter 2

Your story gives me the courage to try and better my situation too. I have found a woman who promises me infinite love and a life of adventure...slut wife style! All I have to do is give up my present wife and the fortune I've made. Parting with my money is the hardest part. LOL. Thanks again for writing this and I hope to read more soon.

Great writing! Got me hard and keen! Well done!

great story i hope you continue it. it would be great if his wife adopts the female supremacy lifestyle and convinces her friends to also.imagine them holding an indoor party or better yet a pool party where the husbands are naked butlers and must serve drinks to thier fully dressed wives and their fully dressed new boyfreinds.i like the fact that unlike some femdom stories the wife is not dressed in leather or wearing spiked heels .in true female supremacy the wife wears whats comfortable such as a sundress and flip flops or better yet she's relaxing in front of the tv with her freinds and their wearing no make up or nail polish khaki shorts ,"wifebeater" tank tops and are resting their barefeet up on the coffetable while their househusbands are naked and in the kitchen or serving them wine or kneeling down and massaging their feet. too many stories have the man being a transvestite. not many women would want that but most women would love a naked servant to stay home and do all of the housework while they go out on a 'girls night out". many would love to have the freedom to cuckold their husband and would probaly relish humiliating him a bit and enjoy their newfound status as head of household

its a good story hope you write more i like the ones where the husband is reluctant though. i think the best ones are where the husband loses a bet ,is tricked or better yet gives in to his wifes insistence.its great when there is a female supremacy theme to it as well and the husband gradually is reduced to having to serve as a naked servant to the wife and her lover.i would love to read a story where this happens and the wife invites her girlfriends, who never liked hubby because he was rude to them, over for dinner. think how humiliating it would be to serve the women and his wifes lover naked calling them ma'am and the lover sir. it would be the ultimate revenge fantasy for most women. they could even have a cuckold ceremony where the husband has to strip and kneel naked in front of his wifes lover and admit the lovers sexual,intelectual and physical superiority over him as the wife's girlfriends giggle ,laugh and cheer at his humiliation as the wifes stud grins arrogently, and puts a chastity belt on the husbands penis .her friends could taunt the formally macho husband as he obediently serves everyone drinks afterward as a naked butler

I was so looking forward to a hot story.

I did however think that your forward was outstanding

There is no more delightful act than submitting your own wife to a superior black stud and making sure that fucking is great for both of them. Once your wife can see a difference between your pathetic winnie and a real man's dick she will refuse to have your dicklet inside her. You should honor her wish and be happy for her.

I like your story. The writing style is clear and to the point. Your adventure advances with even progression and builds anticipation very nicely. I can't wait to read chapter two.

On a personal level, I find the anal stuff distasteful, but that's just me. I do enjoy the cuckolding play, but in my life I prefer being my wife's true love and the other guy being her fling.

Hope to read much more of your work.

Gofore

PLEASE!!! Where can I finish reading this !? I'm a publisher contact me

thank you so much for this...it's exquisite...so beautifully written....the characters developed, unwrapped with such care and skill....and the story perfectly captures the obsession and machinations of men like me....a man married to a beautiful woman he craves....and craving her unfaithfulness....thank you again and again....

That there is no more of this junk.

Great development! I'm looking forward to Chapter 2 and learning how Mr. Steele seduces Nikki.

The "author" of this drivel tempts us to "read it" but not comment, as if we did comment, we SURELY would be "closet weak-fucks who couldn't successfully tend to our women" (or something similar as only he could understand).

Challenge accepted, but on my terms. I DID NOT read the story, but WILL comment as it is my right, weather I read the story or not (and I definitely did not).

The entire spineless generation we have spawned is an embarrassment to human-kind, especially the WW2 generation which would collectively roll over in their graves if there was an inkling of what we allowed social order to become. The need for "safe-spaces" on college campuses as well as idiots participating in "slut-walks" and "3rd wave misandry" (AKA feminism) are just a few of the more popular sentiments of a social fabric being torn asunder. Cuck stories and cuck-lifestylers are a byproduct of our social decay as well as communism and leftist ideology in practice. I don't need to read about it to understand the danger it poses to our future.

The future is lost. The Socilaist reigns with her iron fist and freedom lies in the hands of men unwilling to think beyond the end of their dicks (or so this author wishes us to believe - if we were only to read his attempt at entertainment).

No Thanks!

I like freedom and the option to choose my future (as well as my doctor LOL - sorry Barry). No, it is time REAL men step up and put their foot down on the weak necks of the spineless generation. If not for us than for our posterity.

I know it is foolhardy to post real "manspeak", but somebody has to do it, lest bitches such as this author feel they have the power to walk over the real men left among us.

Let the character develop freely into the fantasy... 3 characters with good basic direction, let each develop, separately ..... Each should melt into a finale..

It's plodding and wooden, could not buy into any of the characters. Une étoile

I am a life long submissive, and now a cuckold. This was a very hot story. I hated for it to end. I wanted more. But that seems consistent with my life, always wanting more. And those very desires making me a slave to both my mistress and her man. She has made it clear that he is her man, and I am just her submissive boy, But just like this story, it both fulfills me and continually drives me to obedience and deeper submission. Thank you for this story.

Agree with anonimous below. "Plodding & wooden. Author should take up other pursuits with his computer. I couldn't finish. Quit in chapter 3. Only scrolled here to post a comment

Waiting for the next chapters...