by CanadianM
This was a short descriptive story . Very well written . It didn't lead to where I thought it was , but alas that is where the writer makes it his story . Am reading the series and enjoying it very much .
Thanks
Too bad you didn't like the story... but more constructive criticism would be helpful.. always looking to improve!
This story didn't turn me on. Erotica should be a mind fuck. Creating pictures in your mind.