All Comments on 'BBW's First Orgasm'

There was sufficient character development to move the story. It showed sensitivity and warmth. I'm impressed that you wrote the piece from the male perspective and carried it out convincingly. Hope that you will consider writing more and sharing with us.

Very good story. I hope you right a few more very quickly. Cant wait. I do believe your character is the women of my dreams.

Jack

I think he is the man of my dreams!!!!!

Such a great story. The characters are wonderful...please continue the story, cant wait for more

They both sound so gorgeous and yummy. Where can I find a man like him? :o) Keep up the good work. I think you should try your hand at a series (not necessarily with these characters, though I would love more of Beau).

Hey everyone! Thanks so much for the positive feedback and comments, it definitely helps a lot to know that I'm on the right track at least!

As for the characters, Beau is based on my dream guy and Theia is actually based on me. I'm not sure if these two will have more fun to share but there is more stories on the way, with or without them! :)

Great work and just the start, hope there is more to come.

This story had all the elements I love to read. I can't wait to read the rest of the series.

The description of Theia sounds so much like Jeanette, a wonderful lady I had the pleasure of meeting several years ago. So passionate and what a lover she was, miss her so much. Sure wish she didn't have to move away!