All Comments on 'Be Careful What You Wish For'
by murphy621
- 16 Comments
Anonymousabout 13 years agoHow the fuck did that happen? I mean, one breath she was saying she didn't want to lose her husband and the next she's professing undying love? What was so good about "sir douchbag" that she was in love with?
Orgasms? Money? What was the basis for her love?
This story stunk to high hell. If doesn't even deserve a one.
betrayedbyloveabout 13 years agoAcrappy story by a crappy author. You should stick to dreaming and playing with yourself and never write again.
cheryl_4funabout 13 years agoit is obvious the readers here have a zero sex life, so pitiful, joan just learned what she should have known and harry never will probably
how wonderful it is to enjoy sex, u can ssex with diff ones and stil have love and erotic hot sex, wow what if joan got some black cock
Anonymousabout 13 years agoThis is actually a very good story, at least the idea behind the story. The next time you men/swingers even THINK about giving your wife to another man or woman THINK about this story and THINK about what the husband had to give up because of his fetish. Was he a wimp? of course he was should he have beat the living hell out of the 'Master'? Hell yes, but his wife was lost to him after the first day of the master and the wife meeting better to cut his loses and find another woman and FORGET about watching some other person fuck his wife.
Anonymousabout 13 years agoWould have been mr asshole and the bitch being shot in the head by harry.
Then Harry shooting himself. People like there three are fucking scum and should be culled from society.
Anonymousabout 13 years agoHard to read because the author kept getting who was saying what mixed up. Try proofreading instead of just spell check.
Anonymousabout 13 years agonaysayers eh, well having been a successful dom for many years I can say I dont like the story. And if she falls for him that easy the next one will be even easier. Trash is trash, after having had her he should have given her back to here husband and let him suffer with her the rest of his life. You dont marry women like this u use them and lose them. And the master of this story is a real wannabee.........
Anonymousabout 3 years agoThe author used this unlikely plot line at least twice. Neither time was it a winner.
The MC destroyed the lives of their children. That's a capital crime and should be punished accordingly.
