All Comments on 'Be Careful What You Wish For Ch. 02'

Then you need some serious help. And next time put the story in the FETISH section.

he either should get the two wives to catch their husbands the next time or use a hidden video and send the tape to the wives of his two friends.

For what it's worth, this story was NOT submitted to the Loving Wives section. LIT editors saw fit to place it here on their own. It was not my choice.

Turned

Fuck this is bad

What an awful Disgusting story. Not worth reading.I hope her husband find his balls back and And kick her ass out the door. A loving wife would never act like this towards her husband regardless of their problems.

...to fix it. Show what happens when a person is pushed too far....

Thomas should get her hooked on drugs and then start pimping her out to anybody and everybody. Once he gets his revenbe, leave the bitch handcuffed to a bed and begging for mercy.

That sucks and if true [as JPB and Ohio have both previously stated], that is "fucking wrong". We will lodge our displeasure at the right place if this is indeed true.

Don't listen to that other negative feedback crap. It has been a great story so far. I'll never understand people that read a story that they don't agree with and then bitch about it. If this kind of FANTASY is not for you, move on!

With the strong feedback that you have received so far, it tells you that it is a well written story. If it wasn't, people would just move on without taking time to post anything. Great writing always invokes response.

Please keep going!

Turned,

You had better continue this. I really want to read more. Don't keep me hanging like this. It has been great so far.

Thanks for sharing!

Sorry to keep you waiting for the final chapter. It is coming, I have not forgotten.

As people are always saying, it's just a story. Thomas is a cheating asshole, no doubt about it. WHY would she want to stay with him? I have no problem with him wanting her to be sexier and she sure seems to know how. She barely seems to be able to keep herself under control. Has she dialed it down because he has been such an ass? Is she afraid of her own sexuality? Of course Thomas doesn't just talk to her, he insults her. Lexy's anger is well justified. How does this nice girl channel the nasty slut? We need more insight to make that believable. The setup with his two friends and the warm up to that is clever and well planned out. She is being bitchy (or is it slutty?) but not enough so he can figure out what she is up to. <br><br>

Then it goes off the rails IMO. It makes no sense that he would submit to the continually escalating humiliation. She isn't building this up gradually, surprising him and wearing him down. She's steamrolling over him and all he does is grumble and then do what she tells him to. This is an arrogant guy. He is NOT going to capitulate. Then he lets himself be tied up? Really?? He has a Queen Bitch trying to slice and dice him. She's totally out of control and he's just allowing himself to be tied up? Maybe if his friends tied him up it might be believable. <br><br>

Then she anally rapes him. And that's OK too. Yeah, right! She's lucky that after raping him and letting him go that he didn't kill her. She gives no thought to the concern that she might be in danger after untying him. And after that she makes him crawl to the shower and pees on him? Then he meekly slinks off to sleep on the couch. And then she has these brain dead ramblings about not doing permanent damage to his self esteem? ROTFLMAO! She says she doesn't want to end up with a wimp but is not scared that he might get very angry and hurt her? He already is a wimp apparently. But he's supposed to be confidant and arrogant, a complete contradiction. <br><br>

The theme of the story had promise but the execution explodes the bounds of credibility. The arrogant and confident Thomas does not fit the meekly accepting Thomas. We are not told that this excites him at all. So she's going to keep attacking him until he snaps and shoves a knife in her? Sorry, the extremes are just not believable.

maybe she's a tad bit too bent out of shape? Wanted a reason, to...change?

This story is actually rather depressing.

stupid. She pisses in his mouth and fucks his ass and she's worried about his self-esteem? Ridiculous!

"Does Lexy know why Kevin and Maria are divorced now? Cause I'll bet she wouldn't be too happy if she found out what part you played in that!"

Ah, yes. Maria.

How do you solve a problem like Maria?

How do you catch a cloud and pin it down?

How do you find a word that means Maria?

A flibbertijibbet! A will-o'-the wisp! A clown!

Oh, how do you solve a problem like Maria?

How do you hold a moonbeam in your hand?

Sorry, too easy. Much like it takes only one Marxist to change a lightbulb (because the bulb contains the seeds of its own revolution) all of the seeds are already planted for the final breakup.

Lexi notices briefly that this has gone too far, makes a brief half-arsed attempt at damage control (not sure what he'd want with half of her arse, but it's an excuse to add more porn to the story) and there's an incredibly short-lived hope of salvaging what's left. Briefly. The next time hubby's so-called buddies see her they manage to manipulate her into having sex with them just one last time for old times sake before saying 'adieu'. They get caught. (Oops!) As there's no communication left in the marriage, ultimately there's no reconciliation, RAAC or otherwise.

Hubby divorces Lexi, espouses Maria and they live happily ever after.

The end. :)

I would divorce her ass as soon as I could ... She went too far...

Pull those two assholes into court and have them spill their guts and see what she gets from the divorce...

Don't worry about the sensitive men's comments. They always get a little sensitive when you talk about their assess! It's a fantasy guys sheesh! But there are men this submissive around....

He called the Police. And she went to jail for assault and battery. He divorced her fat ass and kept most of the marital assets. Now who was stupid?

I do wish Literotica would not allow unfinished stories to be posted. It's very frustrating. In this messy tale a wife decides to demean, degrade and humiliated her husband. End of her marriage. What man with an ounce of pride and self respect stays with a woman that has shown him, by her actions and words, that she has no love or respect for him? She leaves the room and if she's lucky Thomas doesn't call the police and have her arrested for assault, battery, sexual assault and spousal abuse. If she's lucky he doesn't stand up and beat the snot out of her and leave her bleeding on the floor. If she's lucky all he does is pack his things and leaves her. Stupid, unfinished story.

1 star

She’s lucky she got out of the hood and married a man with a job. Cunt needs to be reminded of her place.

Yes it should have been placed in Fetish or BDSM, however, there is a clue in the description.

Kykidd87's name speak for itself. Other comments liked/hated the story or the idea, liked/hated the character...fair play. Insulting what he believes to be her background or her place in society is infantile, puerile and offensive. Critique the story but keep your personal filth to yourself.

Lawsie me, Sapphire done turnt de tables on his ass.

I’m glad you decided to end this story here. It’s a disaster. First, it’s it’s not Loving Wives or Fetish - it’s Reluctance/Non-Consent. Thomas was beaten and anally raped. Second, I hope you got whatever anger you had at the time of writing this out of your system. The story is not believable, except the part about how his “friends” act - assholes tend to have asshole friends, so that’s spot on. But Lexy thinking she’s going to do all that shit to Thomas and he’s still going to be around?? Girl might need a coroner instead of a divorce lawyer.

I loved it . nothing sexier than having a black goddess make her cum eating cuckoo d bitch do freaky things. Push his limits in bed . then the alpha comes back until she makes him obey again