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And I've even been writing again. Words flow out of me like rain now. I've sent a few books to publishers and I'm eagerly awaiting responses. Mabel is near tears I'll leave the shop. I promise her I'll visit. I owe a lot of this to her.
I don't know how I found my happiness. Maybe it was Dr. Lange. Maybe it was feng shui. Maybe it was even Barry Manilow!
Or maybe it was just me.
- COMMENTS
NaiaTinkAbellaover 3 years agoGot a little clumsy at the scene where he's asking if he's in the friend zone. I would have expected him to kiss her passionately while they were drinking and then she's speechless and he runs away and she has to run after him or goes to see him the next day.
James7594about 5 years ago"... got on my laptop... " But the laptop was 'hopelessly broken' ! I know it is a minor comment but it still bothers me!
The main story though flowed very smoothly and I loved the way it worked out! The characters were well fleshed out and the pace was good.
But the ending was very rushed and incoherent! It looked forced and in many ways spoiled a well developing attachment to the story! I hope you work on it and ensure that the endings are a bit more fleshed out or at the very least, written at a good pace!
J. Jamie Dupane
