All Comments on 'Beach Day'

The ocean beach can be such a primal place for sensual arousal, and this story harnesses the aphrodisiac qualities of sun and surf in beautiful ways. The first half of this story, as the woman bares labia (and clit) to ocean breezes, had me swelling and cresting with desire to....keep reading as she takes us under the skin of a woman in a compelling, intimate, arousing way. As she sexes it up with the park rangers, the story lost some momentum for me: it was good stuff, but I missed the more poetic prose of her celebratory meditations on cock and clit.