All Comments on 'Beach Day Ch. 02'

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witchwithawandwitchwithawandalmost 16 years ago
Mmmmmmmm....

That and part 1 was the kind of day at the beach I would love to have, both givin and recieving. Fucking HOT!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
hot

Very very hot story, I wish you stuck to the past tense throughout though. Going from "I did this" to " I do this" takes me out of it, despite how hot it is.

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