All Comments on 'Beach House'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
Motivation

This is a nice stroke piece, but as with so many stroke pieces where pretty girls come on to middle aged men, you don't make me understand why she chooses him. You need to give her motivation; otherwise she's cardboard, and I don't get off on fucking cardboard.

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
It's gonna cost him

This weekend will cost him about six million bucks, give or take a couple, if his wife finds out and/or gives a shit. He seems to be a bit casual about it all

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
Not A Bad Story

Not sure if it's true or not it was still quite a sexy story.

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
yawn

hell-oh ... her motivation was money. "{my mother] was Miss Puerto Rico in 1984 and married some very wealthy tycoon."

don87654don87654over 15 years ago
Lust at its best!

Very erotic.

jcrjl2009jcrjl2009over 10 years ago
Fantastic

Wow... hope 'next day' cums soon!

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