All Comments on 'Beach Vacation Voyeur'

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Cat_photobuffCat_photobuffabout 18 years ago
Take me to your island!

Aww, what a great story! I felt like I was right there on the beach, I could actually feel the warmth of the sun on my own bare skin. And I had such a strong urge to touch myself the way Jill did for her secret voyeur. The only thing that made me sad was that Grant never saw how beautiful and sexy his wife is. Great story, good writing, keep up the good work.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 16 years ago
WOW

I was tired but i had to finish this one,,, Great story looking forward to seeing more (case)

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Doll likes it

Wow...you capture her so beautifully.

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Sensual

I thoroughly enjoyed this. Very well written.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago
Some slips

biking instead of bikini . . . Dang spell check

Fishing? or sailing?

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
good read

enjoyed the read - loved living in a small town and knowing a neighbor across the street could see me in my apartment - made me feel sexy and heck - even gave him a few little shows as a turn on also - so this was fun for me to read - please write more

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