All Comments on 'Beach Weekend Ch. 02'

I have read most of your stories and have enjoyed most, but I have to say that sometimes I get lost within your dialogues. You have a way with words but sometimes I think readers lose their place while reading your stories. Thanks for your postings....

I personally love your topics and detailed descriptions. I also always love how you usually incorporate hoisery in there somewhere. :) Big fan of yours Jen! Keep up the good work!

Your writing from a woman's perspective is so sexy! Although I'm eager to read Ch. 3, I don't mind waiting, because I'm sure you'll knock my socks off.

Good pace to the story. Looking forward to what comes next.

Carabelle is a nice place, more private than most places here in Panama City. Can't wait for more!

Please continue the story. I am excited to know the next time they will get naked again. Will they eventually end up engage in sexual intercourse with each other's husband?

Great beginning. Can't wait for more!!!!

The development of the sexual feelings of each of the women is nicely done. Unfortunately, nothing is revealed about what the guys are saying to each other. Even though we can guess at the destination of the plot, it is exciting to see it unfold. You are a skillful developer of the direction the story is going. It makes me envious -- not only of the plot development, but of the sensuality of the characters. Oh, well.... Rick

we will never know where it goes from there.

Two things Florida has two many of are alligators and whores. This author writes about one of them.