All Comments on 'Beatrix Unbound: Letters to a Friend'

Kia Ora Salteena,

Great to read one of your stories again.

Cheers,

Wizarddriver

Auckland.

You didn't write anything for a long time before you wrote this. You were doing alright until about the middle of the 7th chapter, but in the 8th you pissed in the bed. You totally ruined the story by having the father and uncles rape the young girl. That's when I stopped reading. If you think this kind of shit makes for a good story then you're sadly mistaken. If you are going to write more and intend to put this kind crap in your stories then just forget about it. With mine, you only got two comments so far since 12/5/14. That should tell you something.