All Comments on 'Beautiful Boy Used By Women Ch. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Unfinished?

You must have forgotten to post 2nd, and maybe 3rd, page. I think I am going to like where this is going, especially with the younger daughter looking so good.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago

So far, so good.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Come chapter 2

Love the first

kingswedekingswedeover 12 years ago
Go-o-o-d start for a story

Where are the rest of the pags ao are you going to STRING us along and draw it out.If you do that no one will keep reading.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
boring

How can an incest story be so boring?

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
To little

Ended way to soon for the first chapter try and make the second one longer and get farther into the storyline

jane marwoodjane marwoodover 12 years ago
I would love to see more

Keep going with this story. It has lots of promise and is nicely written and I am sure it will be a firm hit with a lot of readers. Best regards

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Quiet

I am sleeping, oh wait, there is more.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Brilliant

Love it being so concise, teasing the reader. Brilliantly written with endless possibilities- can't wait for next chapter!!!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
very good

great start but too brief. Hope following chapters dont disappoint

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
OMFG

That sucked.

UncleFester623UncleFester6233 months ago

Nice start. Hope the following chapters get hotter

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