by almostluver
that was so awesome can't wait for the next chapter and what other punishments he is going to dish out
Please continue...and soon. I hope you explain the mysteries. Why the fathers demand they marry; how did he become blind; why no electricity, no phones, etc.; and will she get to punish him? No slacks or jeans is a no brainer!
Loving most of it so far but feel your trying too hard to make it exciting and its losing reality ....he tells her her mothers dying yet she comes on his thigh before a priest ??? She's riding a horse a week after a mysterious "accident" that had her in a coma ?? Finally ...she's wearing a black bra beneath a white wedding dress !!! /Can't wait to read more but please ....keep it real .
How the hell is this romance? She doesn't even remotely like him. He's raping her! 1*
She clearly refused, and gave no consent.
He didn't put his dick in her, but be sexually assaulted her.
Multiple times.
This story is fucked up.
I'm not into reading about sexual assault, so I'm going to stop at this chapter.
But seriously, this rape fantasy shit is messed up.