All Comments on 'Because I'm Your Sister Ch. 02'

harsh saying they hope have a car accident & die,

I just thought one chapter was enough cause this one added nothing new & was not needed at all

the first chapter was nicer storywise but this too was hot. good job!

I liked chapter 2. It opened up the relationship and the sex was hotter. This needs chapter 3 with a slutty older female cousin to turn them both out properly.

Despite the comments from those without enough balls to put a name with it, the story is a good read. Looking forward to the next installment.

A love that deep between siblings will not go unnoticed by at least one of the parents unless they are totally clueless. I say this because there is no way these two will be able to act normally around each other even if they got along great before they had sex and declared their undying love for each other. It is your story of course and you can do it how you wish, but I don't see them being able to keep it from their parents for long. It is your decision of course if they get caught and how the parents handle it.

like others said added nothing to the story so was a waste of time. as far as us anons go members are just as anonymous as we are, there isn't a phone book in the world where you can find any of their names. it also seems once you become a member you automaticly become a useless kiss ass and give rave reviews to every thing even trash. if you are smart you will listen only to the bad comments then and only then will you improve as a writer.

IT was a great read the story was in my opion was well thought out.I hope there is more coming with this story.

They need to be caught like that one person said they would have be be dumb not to see the love. And I hope they have a good reaction and are accepting. Good story

Fantastic: loving relationship and hot sex is perfect

As far as the Anonymous comments go, there's nothing wrong with offering constructive while remaining Anonymous, but comments such as "Hope these two get in a car accident and die." do nothing to improve a writer's approach.

Why would anyone take writing advice from someone who writes "if you are smart you will listen only to the bad comments then and only then will you improve as a writer."? That whole post is missing capital letters at the start of each sentence and the only punctuation (poorly) used is commas and full stops.

If you're going to tell someone to improve their writing, you really need to grasp the basics yourself, first.

Hot! Really hawt! Could you please continue 'I miss You during the Commercials', that was really sweet and hot.

Really, just a waste of people's time to look at your writing. The idea of love, and good sex is nice. If you can't tell the storey in 2 pages, you are just writing to impress yourself. Don't write again please, its just not something your good at.

Don't listen to the trolls.

Keep writing:) i'd love to see a chapter 3

Loved every word so far, fantastic story. The only downside is that having read Ch 2, there's nothing more to read at the moment.

Hopefully they'll be a chapter 3, with them trying to control themselves once their parents return. Where they go and what they do has the potential to be even hotter than what's happened so far.

Just please, don't leave the next thrilling installment too long, the anticipation is killing me already!

I enjoyed this story and part one as much as any on the site. Absolutely and completely wonderful. So sexy, so hot, so slick and cummy sweet... Ummmm!

They made little love all weekend like bunnies. But then what happened when the parents came home? What happend to their relationship in the long term? These are questions and more that I would like to see addressed in another chapter or epilogue.

I don't care if you end it here, everything short of them getting an apartment for 'college' has been covered, and honestly, I hate conflict in these stories, ugh!

Thanks for writing this, and thanks for keeping the anal sex moderately real! Finally an author that wrote in using enough lube and stretching things out first instead of giving some anal virgin idiot the idea that a little spit and sticking it in will work fine, like so many of these authors write!

Please make more of this soon i want to know what happens to their relationship after their parents get there

Sexy descriptions of her ass milking your cock, could feel her plump ass gripping my cock as I read it, great job!

My sister Pallavi has a big fat ass that I have always loved. As kids we use to talk about her big butt all the time. Pallavi use to let me touch her fat ass. I have always jerked off to my sister. I have always liked to jerk off to Pallavi’s pictures thinking about fucking her fat ass. I jerk off in Pallavi’s panties specially Pallavi’s thongs. I love to wrap Pallavi’s thongs on my cock specially the part that covers Pallavi’s asshole. My sister Pallavi loves to get her fat ass fucked by her brother. I rape Pallavi’s fat ass. Pallavi loves it when I spread her fat ass cheeks and finger her asshole. I love to lick Pallavi’s asshole. My sister likes to show me her fat ass. Pallavi loves it when I slap her fat ass. Pallavi is my anal whore.

Lol, I'm as broke as can be.love your writing. Thanks for all of it.

This a good story by the talented, but occasionally too verbose, ZenZerker.

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Thanks!

Brings back memories of my sister and our first time together.

Parents have suspected but don’t wanna know Thank God.💓😍

I HOPE THE AUTHOR COMES BACK WITH UPDATES ON THE SIBLINGS LOVE AFFAIR. NICE WRITING. BRAVO

I loved the story and the series. Do you have an anal fixation or what! That's ok as we all have things we focus on. I hope you keep this story going, but it has been awhile. Thanks for your time and imagination.

write until marriage and pregnancy

Great story 5/5

Nice

Ok besides the mis use of the word voluptuous about a girl that has a flat stomach too much sex and not near enough storyline for my taste and way too much anal that's for gay people had no place in this type of story basically you wrote about a gay guy cause only gay people like anal and your use of the word baby sis was too often said so with all that I don't like it and if you decide to write more to this chapter I will pass on reading any future chapters unless you leave out the gay sex and add more of a story yes I get its a sex story but there was no story it was mostly nothing but sex the key word is sex STORY

I really liked this! Would love a ch 3!