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All Comments on 'Becoming a Gal Friday Pt. 02'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Too Short

You need to keep people interested not just a short wham bam effort.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Sssh

"You need to keep people interested not just a short wham bam effort."

What? Not into flash fiction?

Chill. It takes a while for new writers to learn how to draw out a story.

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