All Comments on 'Becoming a Slut Couple Jeannie'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Oh poor me, Husband is out working for us and I

am all alone. Got to call an asshole and have him fuck me. Oh poor me. All I need is my husbands money and lifestyle. Fuck him!

bruce22bruce22over 14 years ago
Well written but standard plot

I do not quite understand it. Do these gals prefer to live on the dole and have their husbands home the whole time screwing with them when they aren't bombed out of their minds? That is the message given by the lady's reactions.

Damn the job! and if he did not have one where would they be?

Risq_001Risq_001over 14 years ago
Uhhmm, Bob...........

<p>Isn't this the <i>middle</i> of the story?</p>

<p>Without the rest, it kinda doesn't make sense. The rest of the story is easier to follow if you have the beginning. While I won't say that I loved it, the ending will make perfect sense and I know I had less a sense of outrage when I considered all facets and angles of the story personally.</p>

-Risq

TalenhawkTalenhawkover 14 years ago
This one annoyed me

I guess I am just fed up with stories about couple that don't talk to each other. If you don't communicate how can you really love each other? All that needed to happen was her telling him that she wanted to open up their sex lives and could he cut back on the extra work. Only a retard wouldn't do that! TALK!

I am so adamant because I know they are people out there with this exact problem. Maybe the hottest woman I know (tall, beautiful blonde with double d's and the sweetest, sexiest, most fun personality), a work friend of my wife, has this very problem. She is married to an engineer workaholic. She really really loves him but wants sex 3 to 4 times a week. He schedules sex in his weekly planner for once a week. Are you kidding me!!! I would kill for what this guy is wasting.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Yawn....

what, oh yeah, this was a story. Hmmmm...know I read it, but, oh well it was a JPB standard A1.234 so I know the plot, the characters and the ending. Good job, yadda, yadda, etc, etc.

mcwiiimcwiiiover 14 years ago
Don't bother finishing

Your self imposed exile did not expand or improve your story telling skills

Risq_001Risq_001over 14 years ago
Actually,

<p>The story is pretty good, but this the <i>middle</i> of the story. What happens at the beginning I thought was quite funny. And I kinda of wished something like this would happen to me, never would, but I could only dream.</p>

<p>Of course without <i>the beginning</i> the story seems like the wife is the bad guy, but if you read the title of the story, Becoming a slut <i>Couple</i>, it gives you some idea of what to expect.</p>

<p>I'm not saying this for any other reason than, there must be some reason this story is started in the "Middle" and not at the beginning</p>

-Risq

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
as I said before

another wife down the drain. same system , same type of whore.

ryu77ryu77over 14 years ago
Hell yeah JPB!!!

I like his "Becoming a slut couple" stories, and this sure got me hooked. Hope the next chapter will be released soon. Yeah, the typical not-comunicating problem this couple have. I bet Martin doesn`t do anything because for what I´ve understand, he was buging for sex and she convinced him she didn´t want it that much. I bet she forgot about that tid bit, and if she aproached Martin again, he would have said yes.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Good start jpb....

....this is going to end up with all hell breaking loose if you play it right,I hope-pistolpackinpete

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
her choice

he's working to give her a lifestyle and she's going to have that too, even if she plays while he keeps her in it. lets have some consequences and her having a changed life, without him.

1_wombat1_wombatover 12 years ago

Grr annoyed at the stupid cow

Agree with Talenhawk's first paragraph where is the communication.

Surely she can remember that in the beginning of their marriage SHE didn't want to experiment and was the cause of the now no sex husband

QUOTE

Sure, sex was nice every once in a while, but there was more to life than sex. It had taken her a long time to convince Martin of that, but he came around eventually. He didn't bug her now near as much as he used to. In fact she could barely remember the last time he approached her.

UNQUOTE

IF SHE WANTED CHANGE SHE SHOULD MAKE THE FIRST MOVE and several of them at that.

Hopefully we find out that hubby is getting some elsewhere.

As for her being pissed that he is working long hours or away; can't remember it being mentioned that she is working as well OR perhaps if she was willing to have less in life then if either situation changed it would allow him to work less hours or change jobs to one that didn't require extra hours

chootkabhootchootkabhootover 12 years ago
pussy sozzled brain

the cunt truly loves her husband! no delay in calling the cocksman as soon as hubby is delayed. true love. also it's definitely the husband's fault that she is forced to take strange cock in her cunt

tazz317tazz317over 12 years ago
A VIDEO IS WORTH A LOT OF WORDS

however being in action explains what you saw. TK U MLJ LV NV

Tim413Tim413about 10 years ago
The comments lead me to believe this story

was never finished. I hope it was because my guess is that Martin has been screwing around for a long time. Are they going to wind up with an open marriage or will all be forgiven?

SigintSigintabout 9 years ago
I'm Voting On The Writing, NOT The Morality

Other than changing her name it makes for a good chapter 1.

DrKenStoneDrKenStoneabout 8 years ago
So She is a Mute?

So her husband is supposed to read her mind? Instead of cheating and putting all this energy and effort into going out and meeting her fuck buddy Frank, she should step up talk to her husband. Why cheat when she has a husband. What a dumb ass!

tazz317tazz317almost 8 years ago
NO MATTER THE NAME

the game never changes, TK U MLJ LV NV

ChuckEPooChuckEPooabout 6 years ago
Hot cheating slut

Whore gone wild. It appears the moral of this story is... no morals. If a man cheats it it makes him a lousy adulterous ass but... if a woman cheats it’s totally justified because the husband is neglectful or is underendowed or works too much or.... whatever. Martin deserves what he gets... right? Thus a slut is born from his absence.

Loved the writing but not so much her character or should I say lack of character. I wonder what job skills she has to support herself after the divorce?

AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago
CONTINUED

This story is continued with Becoming a Slut Couple Martin/Jean, which on the Submissions page is dated one day later. The continuation is a fairly decent resolution (unlike too many JPB Stories which are unfinished).

According to comments on that story, these two stories (really two parts to one story) are a mild redo of the 3 stories listed between them on the Submissions page. Note dates.

Paul in Oklahoma

26thNC26thNCover 3 years ago

Another of Bob's stories about a poor cheating whore who just can't help it.

dark2donut2dark2donut2over 2 years ago

Two pages of what is basically a bullshit. Nothing in it other than a diary of becoming a cheat. Where is the plot dude?

Buster2UBuster2Uabout 2 years ago

Pretty good story of a cheating slut wife that can't wait for hubbys attention. 5 stars for Bob. Thanks

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Just another slut.

GuyfromShadesGuyfromShadesabout 1 year ago

Thanks for your writing.

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