All Comments on 'Becoming Beth'

Huh?

It could perhaps stand a little polishing, but the premise is sound.

I group stories I open here in three piles: complete turnoff, pleasantly sexy, and interesting more for the story than the sex. This fell solidly in the third group, which isn't a bad thing.

This appears to be your second story on here, keep working on it, maybe get a proof reader or guinea pig, or two, for early feedback? I think you have promise, heh.

Boy, I sure would like you to submit a story to show your expertise in being able to trash somebody elses work. The concept was pretty good. But of course it takes imagination. Maybe that is why you didn't get it.

Ha! Well said Grif!

Good stuff!

beautiful story.. I would only wish to be able to do the same.. watch out guys and girls.. I would be a strong sexy woman and burn through life..

Xxxxxxx

Very original

I myself , enjoyed the story

Loved the story, and really would like to see another chapter or two please

An interesting take on the cycle of life/reincarnation. look forward to Beth exploring her new life.

This was a lovely story. I hope to see more stories from you!