All Comments on 'Bed Mechanic'

by jeanne_d_artois

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doormousedoormousealmost 20 years ago
F'n brilliant story!!!!!!!!

OMG!!!! You are such a talented writer!!!

(It makes my blood run cold thinking what it might be like if Linda was controlling it. She doesn?t have sensible limits.?.. I think you meant Fiona in this sentence)

I loved that story!!!! Talk about revenge LOL

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 20 years ago
Great Imagination

Very imaginative and well written, wouldn't want to get on your bad side!!!!! Wicked Laugh

Stella_OmegaStella_Omegaalmost 19 years ago
niiiice...

nice details, and I like your happy endings.

I, too, noticed Linda where Fiona should be, but- the action was hot enough, so I wasn't sweating the small stuff...

Female_83Female_83about 10 years ago

This is well written

NezhulNezhulalmost 8 years ago

It was good, although I felt the ending to be a bit crumpled. You spent so much time in the beginning, developing the story, but you end it so fast. I also feel like they reconcile way too fast, to the point it looks unnatural.

cslt1cslt1over 4 years ago
5 Stars

Loved the Ending

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Hmmm

Anyone have Fionas number?

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