All Comments on 'Beg For It'

It was superbly written, with great attention to detail. Linda had no way out, and the concept of using her lust against her was fantastic. Keep up the smooth prose and strong storylines!

Strong story line - huh? It is old and just as preposterous as it was the first time. The narrator is a psychopath. Well written? Not unless you thing painting by the numbers creates great art. No suspense - entirely predictable, and completely unlikely

omfg !!!!

sexy and depraved. So wet right now.

Imprisonment, sex under duress and threats and repeated sexual assaults may not be rape but are still felonies.

This was too long with way too little action for my taste. Also, there needs to be a part 2 where he takes her ass.

Hat had a great mix of suspense but at the same time didn't drag out with an over abundance of illogical details. In short, you took the perfect amount of time, not too short, not too long. And I won't even describe my pleasure with your writing style.

I absolutely loved it..I have never commented on anything before but I just had to after reading this. You somehow managed to not be overly violent, not all focused on anal sex and there wasn't any cheesy cliches or awful dialogue ( all of which are a huge turn off to me). This was naughty and dirty yet sensual and super hot. This is the first time I've actually cum reading a story. Thank you, you are an excellent writer.

Can a story get.

If you ever get back to writing again these characters a begging like Linda for a sequel.