All Comments on 'Behind Enemy Lines Ch. 01'

by Mimi069

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
wow

Great story can't wait for more:)

Tracy1115Tracy1115almost 11 years ago

Hott! I hope this turns into a series...can't wait for more!

inspector123inspector123almost 11 years ago
Nice start

The sex scenes in the shower was so hot! Hope that you will post more.

didntseeuxtheredidntseeuxtherealmost 11 years ago
Has potential but...

Nice start, but you are moving to fast. There's no character build up. Slightly disappointed.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
Woohoo

One of those stories to make your heart race when it get steamy... love it. A better name for the soldier would have been like "Mike" or something else stronger.

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