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All Comments on 'Behind the Green Veil Ch. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
I liked the story & want to read more....ignore the pedants... so boring and silly.

Please keep writing, thanks for interesting story.

rayironrayironover 7 years ago
Good

Warmly, sensitively and intelligently written...Thanks!

Horseman68Horseman68over 6 years ago
Truely Exceptional.

Aside from the superlative writing of the personal dynamics of the two people whose relationship is evolving, the insights into daily tribulations of Iranian life are exceptional. Am hooked to continue with these two.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago

The writing and plot are excellent. Much better than one typically finds online. Thanks for writing and sharing this story, and please continue.

RangeExpanderRangeExpanderover 4 years ago
Beautiful - and thanks for addressing diversity and difference

Wonderful buildup of the sexual energy, wonderful loving respect the two show to each other - and best of all the way you address the challenges faced by people considered as "other" than the mainstream, whether in Iran or the US or anywhere.

Xzy89c1Xzy89c1almost 4 years ago
Treatment of black men?

Treatment of black men in high crime areas is the proper way to say this.

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