All Comments on 'Being of Service'

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H.H.MorantH.H.Morantover 12 years ago
Retread of a couple of old male fantasy story lines

The lesbian who will submit to heterosexual intercourse to get pregnant turns out to hotter than a two dollar pistol - that is an oft repeated story line

One common variation is that the guy has had a vasectomy

So this guy is a lying son of a bitch willing to fuck with his friends' emotional lives and dreams.

The sex scene was about average - maybe a little bit more - but the average here is typically put Tab A into Slot B - so that isn't high praise

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
great read

Hope your planning to continue this story, did it or didn't take will Susan milk the cow again :)

Did Shelly get Prego??? Thanks

GrimsbainGrimsbainover 12 years ago
Ok, but did didn't like the ending.

The story was ok but I don't like how it ending. It takes what otherwise was a kind of nice story about a good guy helping out an old friend to a jack ass taking advantage of someone that trusted them with one of the most important things in life.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
all the same

Seems like they were all users in this story, which was probably the only reason I didn't hate any one of them.

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