All Comments on 'B'elanna and Seven Ch. 01'

the other stories you wrote her romantic and sexy , this was just pure fucking hot, if i hadn't just been fucked i would of definitely needed to be fucked it was that hot and turned me on that much, keep up the writing of these stories cause i love them, meera.

A little too short but I like it alot.

I'll try to make the next chapter longer

You had a great premise, but the story felt a bit rushed. My advice is to flesh-out the story a bit more, so that the readers can savor it. Good luck to you!