All Comments on 'Believe Ch. 01'

hope for more soon

I've got the whole story written up on paper, I just have to type it on the computer, edit and stuff.

I'm a little busy right now, but it should be out within a week. The second chapter has alot more action, too. Hope you like it.

Once in a while, a reader comes across a story that's so hot, it's unforgettable. This is such a story !!!

Looking forward to the rest of the story!

I like the style of your storytelling. Really pulled me in. Please, oh please continue this. I would really like to see how all this ends.