All Comments on 'Below & Above: A Fable of Lust'

This is an immensely erotic, incredibly well-written, wonderfully long, meaty story. You don't often find anything like this here, where there's an actual story line outside of the sex, and the length of the composition actually satisfied my voyeuristic tendencies too. And the sex you've included is delicious, arousing and leaving me wanting more :) Bravo!!

Indeed the person that left the previosu comment was right in all aspects, and I agree whole heartedly.

I don't think I can heap praise high enough on this story.

I agree fully with the other comments, a true erotic story, not just an extended sexual description.

Very well written, by someone who should certainly consider writing as a vocation if they don't already.

Cheap porn, the horror found in the grotesque and shove-it-up-max vulgarity.

Unredeemable.

Erotica is deliciously vivid, tantalizingly smooth, elegant, and enveloping in more ways than you even knew you had.

Go get a real phallus.

and i can't think of higher praise than that!

This has got to be the best story I've ever read! Incredibly hot, but with a complete story that left me thinking.

And hot!

I am amazed! What a thought-provoking, delicious read :)

That was absolutely fantastic. From your writing style I take it you are an author yourself?

Such a breath of fresh air, it really got me hot between the legs and, professor, here are my moist panties heh. It was brilliant! Please please please write some more!

Oh and, if I have your permission, I'd love to do some illustrations for the story As well :3

All due respect

Tsai

tsai_woden@hotmail.co.uk

I enjoyed the read, and the concept. You have a gift with imagery. Perhaps this is how it is?

I absolutely enjoyed this! Well written, and it kept my attention more than most most stories on here do. I usually have difficulty reading past the first page, but I was entirely intrigued! Good work. Great concept.

....all the way. Good job.