All Comments on 'Beneath the Stars Ch. 02'

by TheFairScribe

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SashaWMSashaWMabout 12 years ago
Just wonderful...

I was happily surprised to see that a new chapter was up for reading, and it did not disappoint! The Lord Byron poem you referenced is one of my favorites...this chapter was just amazing for me. I'll continue to avidly follow your story. I love the way you write!

Alpha_MarmAlpha_Marmabout 12 years ago
Beautiful.....................elegantly so.........

Thank you for this beautiful gift on Valentine's Day.

Full and rich....so very lovely.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
Wonderful!

It's giving me a great insight into Native culture and I'm adoring it more than you could imagine! Looking forward to more! You're an amazing writer.

hodunkhodunkabout 12 years ago
Fantastic Chapter

I love this story and really love all the oldwest type of storys.This is one of the finest i have ever read. Next chapter please.You have become one of my favorite authors.

catman71catman71about 12 years ago
there is another story

montana summer, much like this, with the use of of Lakota beliefs and ideals, and much like that one, i am enjoying this one immensely , hope to continues quickly, and kudos to you for such i likeable story

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
What a great Story!

I didn't want this story to end!

TheFairScribeTheFairScribeabout 12 years agoAuthor
It's Not Over!

It hasn't ended! More chapters to come, I've just been in the midst of a ton of work/life changes ATM, but never fear. :)

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
Moorrreeee.

You have no idea how much I love this. I'm begging you for more.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
more please!

I have been searching and searching for native american porn, stories, etc. And with the exception of some obviously white men in a childs dress up headress, no luck. Obviously culturally, it would be unacceptable for such things to be taken part in, but this is a perfect example of how the beauty of the culture mixed with sexuality can be shown, in a way that is realistic for the setting and the people. Please write more! <3

Yobo36Yobo36over 11 years ago
Mind blowing.

Well written, exciting and mysterious. Can't wait for more!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
More Please

I am looking forward to more of this intriguing story.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
love!!!

This is amazing. I love it!!!!! Please please go on!!!!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
please continue!

You know, I almost gave up looking for NA stories here that were:

-set in the past

-NA man/other woman

And lo and behold I come upon yours & what's more, it's actually well written and so insightful of NA customs! Please continue this story!

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