All Comments on 'Best Friends'

"We're both only children", negates the need for: "neither of us have any brothers or sisters".

"we're both only children" can have two very different meanings:

1. Neither of them have siblings

2. Neither of them is an adult.

... so the next phrase clarifies which was meant, and so IS necessary.

As good as it gets, Thank You

A wonderful read. Good story line, nice build-up, credible characters. I love the dialog between them when they're exploring their sexuality-- much hotter than straight description.

Great story, Slam. I love the dialog between them. Nice love story, and HOT.

Captures the essence of friendship progressing. Quite a few relationships follow this path especially with shy nerdy types. Good job.

No, it wasn't. It was great!!! I truly enjoyed it. I would have liked, more story, so please write more about them. I liked the descriptions, of your friends, and I have always been a sucker for a red head.

Brought back memories of a couple in our neighbourhood back in the 50's. Really well written and realistic.

We see again why so many of your stores have a red H!

;o)

I liked the story. Quite Steamy:-)

I love the tenderness and romance of this first time. Beautiful story. There was more dialogue here than with my first time. We were both virgins but seemed to know what to do. What an experience being touched for the first time. WOW! There is nothing like first time love, Will remember it and Linda for ever. Due to a bad case of immaturity on my part, we broke up. Biggest mistake of my life. I still regret it after over 45 years. But I would not have my present wife of 36 years:). I look forward to reading more of your stories.

A really nice "Coming of Age" story ,and certainly a 5 rating,but unless this was during the Woodstock era,I don't think that the parents,especially Bri's mom,would be conspiring to have the kids fucking at 18. And while it was nice having them describing what each should do when they first screwed,it got a little too clinical,and they both seemed a little too expert,in what was being described. ~ Great story though.

pleas more best story in years.

Loved it, but wayyy too much mentioning of the mom.

Was a bit of a mood kill

Hm, it seems this Brianne/Erik story shares too many patterns with the beginning of Colleen/Nathan story.

Way to much taking. Show, don't tell is an important tool for writing.

lovely story