All Comments on 'Best Friends Ch. 02'

by Sexy_Mike

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 16 years ago
GREAT story!

Absolutely loving this. I love the story and the characters. Your writing has drawn me in completely. The only thing...the chapters are too short. I'm greedy I guess, haha. Can't wait for the next one. AWESOME job Mike! :)

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 16 years ago
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The story is great! I look forward to the next chapter. Please consider an editor. The mistakes make the reading less enjoyable.

msjay123msjay123almost 16 years ago
Really good........

but way to short!!!!!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 16 years ago
very good

where is the chpt 3 installment? darn... very good indeed.

bruce22bruce22almost 16 years ago
Teasing us!

This was like the brush of a feather! I really would like the

story about his giving up dating for her.

He does seem either very insecure or a bit dense!

storycentralstorycentralalmost 5 years ago
blah

lazy writing. garbage exposition and little to no dialogue. i'm not expecting much from the next chapters.

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