by Sexy_Mike
Absolutely loving this. I love the story and the characters. Your writing has drawn me in completely. The only thing...the chapters are too short. I'm greedy I guess, haha. Can't wait for the next one. AWESOME job Mike! :)
The story is great! I look forward to the next chapter. Please consider an editor. The mistakes make the reading less enjoyable.
This was like the brush of a feather! I really would like the
story about his giving up dating for her.
He does seem either very insecure or a bit dense!
lazy writing. garbage exposition and little to no dialogue. i'm not expecting much from the next chapters.