All Comments on 'Best Friends Forever'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
I give 5 despite...

I give this 5* despite Erin's 2 years (really?) of lesbian life. Frankly, it contributed nothing to the story line in my opinion. The historical vignettes was a great device for telling the story. This is one of the best "best friends fall in love" stories on LitE.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Wonderful!

Everybody's life and love should unwind like this!

HatracksHatracksabout 7 years ago
Just right

""I don't know. We could go surfing, maybe take a drive. Stop at that little restaurant in Victorville maybe. Then hit Vegas, see a show, get married...?"

It must have felt good when you thought of that. You knew it was just right.

arrowglassarrowglassalmost 8 years ago
Well done!

Enjoyed this!

SampkyangSampkyangalmost 8 years ago
WOW writer!

WHAT kind of a dumb assed cunt would EVER consider someone from Austin to be a Cowboy and others call him Tex???????????????????????? THAT locale MY FRIEND IS THE PUSSY OF TEXAS and it stinks

F_WhateverF_Whateverabout 12 years ago
Thank you!

It was a nice short tale.

LustyBadgerLustyBadgerover 12 years ago
Great

I just wanted to say that I really dug the flashback style, cool story as well.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
beautiful people hook up, film at 11

meh

oldwayneoldwayneover 14 years ago
Good tale!

Thanks for a really fine story. I really enjoyed it.

wonderingwhywonderingwhyover 14 years ago
A perfect bedtime story :)

See? I'm finally getting around to reading one of yours and commenting. This was really sweet. It had its hot points as well, but I loved the ups and downs they went through to get them to their happy ending. I really like that you gave us little glimpses into their lives throughout the years. Nice. (Ugh. I knew boys like the jerks that were trying to break the door down. It was in the 8th grade, and I wish I had a Tony back then to fight them off. Actually, I think one of the idiots was named Tony, now that I think of it. But, I digress.) If it matters any, and this is in no way saying anything against Tony's POV, but I found myself preferring to hear things from Erin's POV. Maybe it's because we share the same type of anatomy, or maybe you write better as a woman (haha j/k), but I just thought I'd mention that.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 15 years ago
Great story!

Loved the story but wish it could be a little bit longer!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 15 years ago
Best ever story I hace read

Best ever story I have ever read in my life till now.. Keep it up and Thanks

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 15 years ago
Best story ive read on here yet!

I loved this story so much! The characters were so relatable. You could easily substitute yourself,whether male or female, to the roles of having a tony or an erin. This beautiful love story contained the passion and feeling each entry on this site should have! I literally could feel erin and tony's love. I loveeeeeeeeedddd this story!! Wel done. :) ps i must have loved it to write a commentt this long lol

Eric_ShiftEric_Shiftalmost 15 years ago
Excellent

Wish I had an Erin of my own. Lit you write the most wonderful stories

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 15 years ago
lovely

wish i had a tony of my own

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