by LitRiter
I give this 5* despite Erin's 2 years (really?) of lesbian life. Frankly, it contributed nothing to the story line in my opinion. The historical vignettes was a great device for telling the story. This is one of the best "best friends fall in love" stories on LitE.
""I don't know. We could go surfing, maybe take a drive. Stop at that little restaurant in Victorville maybe. Then hit Vegas, see a show, get married...?"
It must have felt good when you thought of that. You knew it was just right.
WHAT kind of a dumb assed cunt would EVER consider someone from Austin to be a Cowboy and others call him Tex???????????????????????? THAT locale MY FRIEND IS THE PUSSY OF TEXAS and it stinks
I just wanted to say that I really dug the flashback style, cool story as well.
See? I'm finally getting around to reading one of yours and commenting. This was really sweet. It had its hot points as well, but I loved the ups and downs they went through to get them to their happy ending. I really like that you gave us little glimpses into their lives throughout the years. Nice. (Ugh. I knew boys like the jerks that were trying to break the door down. It was in the 8th grade, and I wish I had a Tony back then to fight them off. Actually, I think one of the idiots was named Tony, now that I think of it. But, I digress.) If it matters any, and this is in no way saying anything against Tony's POV, but I found myself preferring to hear things from Erin's POV. Maybe it's because we share the same type of anatomy, or maybe you write better as a woman (haha j/k), but I just thought I'd mention that.
Best ever story I have ever read in my life till now.. Keep it up and Thanks
I loved this story so much! The characters were so relatable. You could easily substitute yourself,whether male or female, to the roles of having a tony or an erin. This beautiful love story contained the passion and feeling each entry on this site should have! I literally could feel erin and tony's love. I loveeeeeeeeedddd this story!! Wel done. :) ps i must have loved it to write a commentt this long lol
Wish I had an Erin of my own. Lit you write the most wonderful stories