All Comments on 'Best Friends To Lovers Ch. 01'

Hi,

I think it's a good start and surely your writing promises to become better.

Keep it up and try to extend the parts a bit longer by adding some extra activities as well.

Thanks -WS-

You are off to a great start, I really enjoyed your story and writing style but you need an editor, some errors make the story choppy and I had to re-read because it goofed me up.

I look forward to further parts of the story. I'm confident you'll settle into a good consistency.

HP