All Comments on 'Best Friend's Wedding, part 1'

It was a fun read. Please write some more.

We want more to this story

My kind of pre-wedding party - well done - looking forward to the next installment.

Loved your story, great build up. what happened to Mary in the shower??

I saw your posting in the forum, so I know this is your first effort here - but it's obviously not the first time you've ever written. A very sexy vignette, and if you continue the series, as "part 1" seems to infer, you'll be garnering loads of new fans. Nice job, very well-written, well-staged.

Loved the story. Thanks for writing it. Would love to hear more about this group.