All Comments on 'Best I Never Had'

by thegravedigger

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EspressoBolusEspressoBolusabout 16 years ago
confused and rambling

The story was not at all compelling or believable. Aside from that the non-sex is laughable. The only thing true is that the hubby feels like James Dean, a crybaby who wants his mommy.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 16 years ago
No flow...

you kept stopping, starting again, skipping around, and providing trivial information.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 16 years ago
Actually decent

Despite the criticisms of the others. And unlike at least one of them, I like femdom stories. However, it doesn't flow well in places. Still a decent femdom story. And yes, I like praising femdom stories, to counteract the flak from the pricks who read femdom stories, even though they clearly hate femdom stories, just because they feel it confirms their manhood to tear apart femdom stories. Pathetic closed-minded bastards... (And I am, in fact, male myself. And not gay. So I'm not a "MAN HATING BITCH" or "DUMBASS FAGGOT" or whatever else you idiots would have called me.)

AnonymousAnonymousabout 16 years ago
Illiteracy Is So Unattractive

The comment below illustrates that concept far more clearly than I ever could. My sympathies are with the anonymous commenter in the "Usa." Personally, I think anyone who can't correctly identify where they live as the "USA" has no chance of succeeding in anything.</p>

<p>As for this "story," the story line wanders around like a drunken sailor. Whole sections seem to have been added without any purpose at all except, perhaps, to fill up space. At the same time, vital information seems to have been left out that might have made this more of an actual story. Sadly, the erotic passages in this "story" are among the most boring I've ever read. If this is this "writer's" idea of fun and excitement, I'd rather have a migraine headache.</p>

<p>Ron123XYZ in the most fantastic country on earth, THE United States Of America</p>

AnonymousAnonymousabout 16 years ago
Great Story

I can't speak for the others but I thought the story flowed together very nicely. It seemed more real than most of the work I've read on literotica.

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Great stuff!

Hot as Hell, and possibly the most entertaining thing I've read in a long, long time. Kudos.

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