All Comments on 'Best Laid Plans'

Tough audience for this very interesting story.

It would seem that the simpletons among us readers are unable to enjoy a simple little tongue in cheek farce. Why moan about character development when the essence of the protagonists didn't need any development.

All in all an enjoyable short story. Thank you.

Every so often I do so enjoy a good short story when my time is limited. Yours very well fit the bill and given the brevity do so very well fit the bill. Every one of yours I've read is quite enjoyable. Thank you for taking the time to prepare them for the enjoyment of others.

Could have been 5stars

Too short for the theme...in my opinion.

Although theme and story is fantastic

Boink! ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐

Had so much potential and would need a proper ending

Very good. Says everything that needs to be said and nothing more.

Excellent :)

excellent ending original yet plausible.

kind of dumb until the part about your friend at her Lawyer's office and switching papers and property, money demands. Brillant move.

Cute

excellent burn

This would have been improved further with an epilogue, when at the will reading, the two asswipe kids find out he owned nothing, having given away the company and all assets while he was alive, and they get absolutely no inheritance aside from a penny each (as far as I understand the law, if he creates debt, it won't be passed onto the offspring, otherwise that would have been even better). Even so, 5 stars for a realistic burn.

Great; and make way for the bitches’ death and #1 son’s near absolute stupidity.

Greed fucks all in an endeavor to defraud or STEAL

Some stories just beg for an extended version or a part 2.

Damn, I do wish we could have seen the aftermath of this, since they will all be left with nothing, being 43, hopefully, he can find a good woman and have a proper kid that will respect him, but those years are limited

Well, plotted, but too short, and with no real ending or conclusion. 3*

Good job flipping the papers. Author’s stories always leave you wanting a little more.

Another cutie. And you are having fun with these brilliant shorts. Another eight out of five stars.

good twist to the story - burn them

funny fantasy

You could have fleshed it out a bit more with the aftermath, could have been an even better story