All Comments on 'Best Present Ever: Bitch Sister'

An unusual first time story. A switch in dominance made a great tale. On to the next.

Aaahhh...ha, ha, ha...too many people criticizing this work...

Yes, these characters are young; they have "some experience" with life, in different ways. And, they have such similar feelings as we do!!

As people their age do!! If they interact in strange ways, just read the story...stop reading so much into it! And see where it goes!!

I, for one, am enjoying this; yeah, "high drama" and all, still...

Five**5**Stars!! 💫💫💫💫💫💥💥💥💥💥💯⚡⚡⚡⚡⚡

Best present ever.........ALL THREE !!!!! I appreciated NOT having to Guess what you want to Convey. Very good editing.

Great writing. You are amazing! Yours was the first story I read. Love your work.

Gotta love the power shift!

Well done. As a Dom of 32+ years, the power dynamic shift was very accurate.

There are many who don't like the BDSM angle, but truth be told, there are more Dom/mes who are simply victims of pride and 50 shades, who only realize their submissive side after encountering a true Dom/me.

True incest isn't really my thing, although it IS a role play aspect between my wife and I.

I am Daddy Dom and she is my little princess/sub.

Feel free to contact me at alvanzia@gmail.com for technical details and/or ideas for further writings.

Really enjoyed the story and am looking forwards to reading more of this series.

Love the story. As a girl who was the high school slut. Now I'm just a slut. I have been with my 2 step brothers and my step sister and her husband. Plus there friends not to count the number of guys and girls over the yrs the best sex is with my actually brother who I lost my virginity too.

One of the best I've read!

Why do you keep having say "eight-inch cock" -- it's been mentioned so many times.

It's seems quite a stretch for a virgin guy to suddenly becoming so dominant and demanding when he hasn't even had intercourse yet.

Just as unbelievable is Sandra backing off so quickly when she has several subs.

Otherwise, not a bad story.

No BDSM or 8-18" inch for my reading pleaseure, thanks.

I stopped reading as soon as it was revealed that "Matthew" had an 8 inch cock.

It's always nice to have a 'wing person' to help in seducing others.

Very good story. I especially enjoyed the turning of the tables on her. Great characters and action. I would definitely like to read about his taking her friends first. Thank you for sharing your vision and talents.

Well done looking forward to the others.

Stories about brothers and sisters interest me as I didn’t have a sister, but always treated girls kindly. I wonder sometimes how your stories would play out in real life. Because I always respected the girls I was with, I have no knowledge of domme/submissive. It is hot trying to imagine your slant on relationships.

Not into BDSM stories. 2*

I thought it was awesome and had difficulty putting it away to do chores. Thank you

Didn't like it simply put too much disrespect involved I mean wtf I don't know why you like many others thanks it's cool to say or write about disrespecting a woman or the woman disrespecting herself there is nothing sexy about that period I mean I have my own thoughts on why yall do but I'm trying something new so I'm not going to say it I don't care if it's fantasy the fact that it's said even in a story of fansty like this says it's on the writers mind and probably all the time my advice go get help from a professional about why you think that is ok and sexy cause I have noticed I'm a Rare breed when it comes to this site that would be a real man

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Absolutely fantadtic

So fucking sucking hot debauched and depraved, Jasmine. Want would I not give to be doing this with you and some of your gorgeous sex slaves. Cunt crazed fucker.

MILF

SISTERS FRIENDS

MOM

5🌟 🌟 🌟 🌟 🌟

is there a sequel????

Well written, loved it. I’d like to read about the neighbor!

To the person who wrote "pretty bad english": Your grammar sucks!

Love your stories ssl!

This was one of the best stories EVER! I never really appreciated stockings, but now you have me very interested. Well done as always. Thanks for sharing. 5 stars.

I know you're talented, but this story was actually better than expected. I was sleepy and didn't really stroke, but THIS story kept me wide awake

You never fail to produce hit after hit. Thought Michael was a stutterer then realized it was nerves. That, M’lady is a tribute to your writing ability.

No question about it, Sis should be showing her submissive self by recruiting her clique of bitches to service her older brother, whether they arrive in pairs, teams, or one by one, whether it's at home, in the park, or anywhere else.

wrong conjugations, malapropisms...more

Your writing is FANTASTIC!

I can’t wait for the next chapter

Please, make it "Best Present Ever-MOM"...then to neighbor, then sister's friends...stories are SSSSOOOO 🔥 hot!!!!

The boy leaves home at 16. That makes the girl a very young 12. Physical development would NOT have been that significant. A boy that insecure would have spent most summers at Harvard rather than put up with a far more immature sister. A sister who refuses to begin to grow up, choosing instead to remain at the maturity level of 12, if not lower.

He should have wrapped her up in a blanket, bent her over the end of his bed and BEAT the hell out of her, and her ass.

Is anyone else completely tired of hearing that he had a 3 inch dick or a 4 inch dick or a 5 inch dick or a 6 inch dick or a 7 inch dick or an 8 inch dick or a 9 inch dick or a 10 inch dick or an 11 inch dick and on and on and on ?

Is erotic writing all about the measurements of a dick?

I sucked her 25.4 mm nipple into my mouth, next I twisted her left (when facing her) 26.1 mm nipple between my pinkie finger and my index finger of my right hand, you know the hand, the one with the 64.32 mm scar.

The main reason I read your story was the chance that he would order his sister to have sex with his friends or even strangers. That would really heat up the story.

I just wanna say I abso-fucking-lutely Loved how Matt made his sister his slave after she treated him like shit for years,so now instead of her being the domineering one she is the one following orders.But between the dominating subject it is also sprinkled with love and caring after Sandra submits to Matt,hopefully their relationship can grow and get better.

Also I am glad that Sandra got to take Matts virginity,and I always think sisters should be the ones to deflower their brothers,its more special.I also hope Matt and Sandra can turn Beth and Mrs. Raske into both their submissive slaves and fuck the shit (pun intended) and also that fat girl and have an all-out fuckfest.This story is just plain Excellent.Way To Go silkstockinglover,keep it up.

I would be honest about this I don't like the idea of him fucking his mom or his neighbour but atleast I come up with a great idea for you bruh. I was thinking if you could make him fuck her and her friends harem style maybe I was thinking like 5vs1 or 4vs1 is not bad

Amazing story

Please do continue

Why the insistance on anal sex ?

If there is a pussy why get a cock covered in faecal matter ?

Glad to see the Bitch Sister get what she deserves. Really glad that Big Brother gets what he should have gotten.

Hope you continue the series.

First FUCK THE NEIGHBOR, Mrs. Raske, then Sandra's friends before Mom.

Can't wait for the next chapter.

"I slid the carrot into her cunt, fucked her with it for three quick strokes, and pulled it out. My eyes never leaving hers, and my smile never changing, I tossed the carrot into my mouth."

At this point I was wondering when she would tell him she had spent the day fucking and that the carrot had a entire footballs team worth of cum on it.

Mom should be next then she could help bring in sister's friends and their mothers.

Great story, Loved Sis being conquered. I vote Friends first, Neighbor next, then the best of all for last (MOM).

Loved the story!!!!

Friends-1

Neighbor-2

Mom-3

Since his sister had always treated him so badly, I think it was only fitting that he picked her to be his first one, and now is claiming her as his own. It will be interesting to see how that turns out. I think the next story I'll read will be Best Present Ever: Mom. That sounds interesting, but then I've learned from experience that all of your stories are exciting. It was an easy decision to hand another '5' vote to you.

Bro and sis , should do a 3some with mom , with lezbo action for mom and sis , while dad watches and beats off , with much lust for daughter !!!!!

Neighbor next, then Beth, and then mom, all while Sandra watches and guides his cock in their hot fuckholes

Mom first, then the neighbor and then mom n neighbor together doing sister n brother.....mom down on neighbor while kids watch would be blast in your writing style

I enjoy your writing.

The combo really works let them nail the neighbor MILF and mom

Love the story want more.I to see brother an sister work together on their next potential slaves!!

Liked the way story plot as hard to figure in advance.

TLDR

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When I was a teen, My sister had lots of her friends stay over. Our rooms adjoined with a bath in between. She always found a way to get them ready to fuck me and she watched. I have a 9 inch cock and she must have provided me with at least 16-18 teen friends who liked huge cocks. Oh, for high school again.....

We can all relate to fantasies of overpowering that one person that knows just what to say or do to push your buttons. For me, was an uncle. I think I'd like to read about the MILF neighbor. Save mom for last.......

My favorite scene is the carrot and blowjob one, So fucking horny right now. On to Part 2

I guess I'm the "odd man out" but I vote for the MILF next, then the friends, with Mom being his ultimate conquest. Just my $ .02 worth.

that was great I loved the way he got back at his sister and got all the girls thinking about him this is a 10 I hope you wright Best present ever sister friend

great story you have a gift don't stop wright ing and thanks for shareing I look forward to you;r next story or part of this story .

friends then the Neighbor and Mom at the same time. He should Knock - up the Neighbor. Total Revenge on Tyson.

not into mom stuff but the other too both sound fucking rad sisters friends is where my vote goes.

Always screwing a friend

Sister's friend

This story was so well written and so hot. Im so hot myself now i think i will have to take a shower xx (Would love to read about the friends encounter And also mum.)

what a well written story! what a plot imagined by author! with a talrent like this u better be in some kind of writing business my frend.

I loved your story!! As a lover of women, and a lover of women who wear stockings this made me so hard!!

Wanna read best present ever bitch sister's friend

Would enjoy reading about the MILF next door... Nice story

I have a thing for thigh high stockings so of course I loved the story!

as to your question...1 sisters friends and include the teachers. 2 milf neighbor, then save the best for last 3 mom

Keep up the good work my friend. Love the hot dialogue.

all 3 of the other stories

This story is so fucking hot - (a liitle over-the-top occasionally but that's OK) - I cummed twice getting it read!!!! I think you should pursue ALL of the aspects you mentioned - but PLEASE don't have our big-cocked hero fucking around with the next door neighbor's son!!!!! There are a few things sexual that I can't handle and guys blowing guys and fucking them in the ass are two that I find revolting. This eight inch cock possessor is welcome as far as I can see to fuck any of the babes in the story though - that just makes my cock hard thinking about it!!!!! You really do a good job with ALL the really intimate sides of fucking!!!!! Thanks for the erections!

I have Loved this Series ever since I read it

Great slow build up, loved the way you turned the tables on Sandra. As for the next chapter, friends first please. Followed by next door neighbour, then mom. With regard to friends, would this be with close friends first, followed by the entire set of cheerleaders ? That might need a separate chapter for each - please ! But how ever you decide to order them, just knuckle down and get them done as soon as possible, the anticipation of what they get up to next is already getting to me, so please hurry up ! ;o)

Thanks for a great story !

A very erotic and hot story. Nicely done.

Of course you know we want to see them all nocked up sis,mom ,the friends, the family cat the sheep across the road.you see where this is going.

she deserved all she got and she actually wanted it. love to read about the neighbor or friends

Ohmigod this got me sooooo horny i cummed threex while reading this best sex erotica evah! I got so horny

thanks for making me hard.

best sex story ever. i wanna read the other three and there should be even more cock worshiping

Let the neighbor know that she will be impregnated

Maybe it's just me, but I'd like it if he got Della. She seems like a good sub who would do whatever he (or his sister) demanded.

Want to read about all three..... :)

All three, fIRST SISTERS FRIENDS THEN MILF NEIGHBOR, THEN MOTHER. wow THIS WAS ONE HOT STORY.

Can you carry on with the story? I would love to read how Matthew makes Slave pets of Sandra's friends and their Mother! The Mother sounds so caring,i bet she would make a great slave!

All of the above, if only one then MILF

Please make all threes stories I love this it's amazing

All of them.

Yes to all the stories above.... :)

I would very much like to see Best Present Ever: Sister's Friends.

Did you mean 'posterity'?

To the other stories Listed.

Best Present Ever: MILF Neighbor

Best Present Ever: Mom

Please keep writing this one as a complete story it i all captivating

Can't find other stories and having withdrawals. Milf next please then mom . Needing other stories PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE!!!!

Let him tuck nisei mom! PLEASE!!!! That would he great! And do a family three some in the end, maby even haave the dad catch them but Mathew gets all "I'm the man of the house now"!!!!! Get the sister, mom, neighbor, and sister's friends pregnant!!!!

My mind is pretty fucked up! :-)

The series wuld be better is you did the sisters freinds then the Milf neighbor then the mom. It makes it so you save the best for last. :-)

NEED YOU ASK, AS I READ THE COMMENTS MOM HAS IT HANDS DOWN. SEEMS TO A POINT MOST OF UP THINK ALIKE. KEEP ALL THE STORIES THIS HOT AND YOU WILL NEVER WANT FOR A FAN CLUB.................LAROC OF AGES .............................PS YOUR LEGS ARE GREAT, BUT A LITTLE HEAD WOULD HAVE BEEN NICE. HA !! HA !! IT WAS A JOY TO READ.

baby sister has gotten her big brother's virginity and she has become a slave to him and his cock.Now she is going to get any of her school friends or slaves to fuck her big brother because he wants her to arrange it to happen and soon!She is also going to set up the teacher next door who is a nymphomaniac to be one of his slaves on call.The cherry on the top of everything is brother and sister will fuck and suck their mom and she will be one of his growing harem.A man with a big dick controls a lot of willing pussy,young or MILF!!